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Friday 25 December 2009

Peace and Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 102 Santa?













It was Christmas morning.




Sally’s eyes popped open.




Something had woken her.



She’d heard tinkling.



Creeping from her bedroom she stood on the landing listening.



There was definitely tinkling.



Holding her breath Sally listened intently.



Suddenly the bathroom door opened,





Sally jumped back.



“What a relief, I needed that tinkle!” whispered her husband,



“Happy Christmas.”


Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. G-man cancelled FFFs this week but I couldn't resist!




Have a Happy Christmas Everyone.

I'll visit you all next week to catch up.

31 comments:

Anonymous said...

OMG...that's just hysterical...LOL...Loved it. Mele Kalikimaka to you and your family my friend :)

Dumdad said...

Tinkle, tinkle little star that you are. Another good 'un!

Joyeux Noël!

secret agent woman said...

Good to know Sanata wasn't borrowing the bathroom!

Merry Christmas!

quilly said...

Your story has got me griing! Merry Christmas Akelamalu to you and your hubby, too!

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Empress Bee (of the high sea) said...

merry christmas honey!

smiles, bee
xoxoxooxoxoxoxo

storyteller said...

LOL ... you never disappoint ;-)
Wishing you and yours a Joyous Christmas!
Hugs and blessings,
Small Reflections

"May the spirit of Christmas bring you peace, the gladness of Christmas give you hope, and the warmth of Christmas grant you love."

buffalodick said...

Good one! Merry Christmas!

Julia Phillips Smith said...

LOL! I just love your twisty humour!

Hope you've had a Happy Christmas, Akelamalu. X and a ((hug))

G-Man said...

Ake...One of my most loyal commenters, Merry Christmas!

Thanks for one more bit of whimsy for 2009...You Rock!

GEWELS said...

Merry Christmas Akela! And Happy Boxing Day! Miss you.

snowelf said...

Our love to you from across the miles! Merry Christmas!

--snow and the chilis

Linda said...

I hope you and Your Wonderful Man had a wonderful Christmas and a perfectly perfect Boxing Day!

inappropriatesue said...

You always have the funniest 55's!

I'm up too!
http://inappropriatesue.blogspot.com/2009/12/55-flash-fiction-friday-midnight-light.html

Anonymous said...

Hi! Merry Christmas! Xxx

Dianne said...

oh that was a good one, funny and sweet

hope your holiday was a joyous one

CrystalChick said...

Good one!

Hope you and yours are enjoying a Happy Christmas as well. xo

Joanna Jenkins said...

That made me smile :-)))))

Happy holidays

xo

Maude Lynn said...

Love the 55!

Hope your Christmas was wonderful!

Dr.John said...

Cute 55. I didn't do one because of the holiday.

Unknown said...

Wishing you a blessed holiday and a year full of wonder and love.

cheshire wife said...

I hope that you had a magical Christmas!

Cloudia said...

Every time a bell tinkles.....


Aloha, My Sister

Comfort Spiral

Shrinky said...

Must have been all that mulled wine from the night before!

Happy New Year to you and yours, hon.

ann said...

... and still another good larf - akelamalu keep 'em rolling please

ann said...

p.s. hope you and yours had a wonderful christmas and every best wish to you all for a lovely new year -

lotsa luv ann x0x0x0x

Spiky Zora Jones said...

akelamalu: Haha!. I thought it was gping to be Santa's sleigh. hehehe.

But you are right...it was a tinkle.

later sweetie. xxx

Flowerpot said...

And all the best for a great new year Ak! xxx

Joanna Cake said...

LOL, that was fun... and very different :) Happy New Year!

Julia Phillips Smith said...

Happy New Year! *popping champagne cork*

Akelamalu said...

Thanks to you all - I'm glad you enjoyed my silly 55 and Happy New Year to everyone. xx