Be My Valentine
Valentine will you be mine
In your entirety?
My heart is yours,
As is my soul,
Why must you be so petty?
Take off that frown and raise a smile,
It makes your face look crinkly.
We’ll do your favourite and share a bath,
That will make you smiley
and make your willy very wrinkly.
I was feeling naughty!
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
I won't be doing a 55 next week as I'll be in Spain.
41 comments:
great one Ak and happy Valentine's to you - have agreat time in Spain.
Well, you know how to get those wrinkles out by now, I'm betting! You are ready for vacation, I see..
This is cute. Have a great Valentine day and good time on your vacation.
I guess so you were being naughty! My wish for you this weekend is no wrinkled Valentines!
Maybe after you get back you can do a Friday 55 about your trip to Spain!
have fun in spain honey!
smiles, bee
xoxoxoxxoxoxoox
you dirty minx! lol could it be cos your going on vacation :) happy valentine's day and enjoy your time in spain. xoxo
LOVED THIS!
But of course, I'm naughty too!
Tee, hee.
Happy Valentines Day, Akelamalu!
And have a wonderful time in Spain.
You'll be missed!
X
Willy very wrinkly. LOL.
Scandalous! LOL...
I thought you were going to abandon your penchant for the final twist this week, but no! You just reversed the order of it.
Delightful!
Me likey the naughty!
This was great!
And that little smiley heart at the end is simply too cute.
Have a blast in Spain, mi amor, Hula Babe.
In Spain? We'll miss ya! Great 55-thanks for stopping by...
I didn't have to take a bath with you, just read your great story to smile :)
LOL naughty is nice and this is a great and cute 55
Ake...?
Such a Skamp!!!
Naughty AND Nice 55...
You must be in your 'Holiday Mode'!
Have a safe trip....G
I love it when you are naughty.
Now, come here so I can give you a spanking...as a reward. :D
Have a Happy Valentine's Day.
Ciao honey.
I love the poem, Akalamau! I don't care if you're naughty! Happy Valentine's Day! :)
Happy Valentine's Day to you too Flowerpot x
Whatever do you mean Buff ;)
Thanks Connie Happy Valentine's Day to you too. :)
I'll try to do a Spanish 55 when I get back Linda :)
I'll try Bee and you have a great cruise. :)
It's the thought of the sun beating down on my back that turns my thoughts Ciara (wink)
Aw thanks Ron, same to you honey. x
Glad you had a laugh connieemeraldyes :)
I'm so pleased you enjoyed it Mojo :)
Ah just a little bit of fun Strumpet, I'm happy you enjoyed it. x
Yep Spain on Monday Mike I can hardly wait!
Aw you're kind Lu m'deario. x
Thanks Jadey :)
Oh yes I'm definitely in holiday mood G-man ;)
Oh Miss Jones you made me blush! :0
Aw thanks Teach Happy Valentine's Day to you too. x
Interesting poem. Enjoy Spain. we will mis your 55.
I'm blushing! Happy V Day! Have fun in Spain and share when you get back. D
It's great to be full of so much naughty sometimes! Happy Valentine's day and have a lovely trip to Spain.
It's great to be full of so much naughty sometimes! Happy Valentine's day and have a lovely trip to Spain.
Another little gem, my friend! aloha Poet ;-)
And a very happy Valentine's Day to you BOTH-
Naughty and hilarious.
Also, a belated Happy Blog-a-birthday to you.
O dear....that bath must be really COLD!!
naughty but nice. happy valentine's to you!!!
Thanks Dr. John :)
Oh sorry I mde you blushDonnetta x
Yes it is good to be naughty sometimes Pam ;)
Happy Valentine's Day to you too Cloudia and thankyou. x
Glad you enjoyed it Jeff and thanks for the blogversary greetings. x
Nah we just stayed in too long Mona (wink)
Thanks Shadow and the same to you. :)
Naughty and nice and now for the spice in Spain! Happy hearts to you and enjoy your trip...
Thankyou Lulda x
HA! Very clever! That made me laugh.
bad girlx
Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha...!
Hahahhaha ... thanks for the chuckles! Hope your Valentine's Day was lovely.
Hugs and blessings,
LMFAO, say NO to wrinkled willies lol....
Finally about to reconnect here AGAIN..... gawds sake...
Have the most super of holidays....
and if you find any wrinkly you know whats, well, take photos LMFAO
x
ahahaha!!! oo love it!!!! Naughet ake!!
Ah I'm so pleased it made you laugh Trav that was the intention :)
That's me Topchamp! ;)
I take it you enjoyed it Julia :)
I hope your Valentine's Day was good too Storyteller x
If I see any wrinkly you know whats I'll definitely take a photo Marmie!
Glad you liked it Emmie x
Time for a holiday, I think. Hope you have a good one!
Funny! lol :-D
Nothing wrong with being naughty. :) Come see my Let's Be Honest post.. hahaha.
Hahahaha! I bet you can fix that though! ;)
Hee hee. Love it. Sorry I've been MIA lovely Akela. It's been so good to read today. Hugs. And happy blogiversary too. xoxoxoxox
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