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Friday, 13 February 2009

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 63 Be My Valentine

Be My Valentine


Valentine will you be mine

In your entirety?

My heart is yours,

As is my soul,

Why must you be so petty?

Take off that frown and raise a smile,

It makes your face look crinkly.

We’ll do your favourite and share a bath,

That will make you smiley


and make your willy very wrinkly.
I was feeling naughty!


Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

I won't be doing a 55 next week as I'll be in Spain.

42 comments:

Flowerpot said...

great one Ak and happy Valentine's to you - have agreat time in Spain.

buffalodick said...

Well, you know how to get those wrinkles out by now, I'm betting! You are ready for vacation, I see..

Connie said...

This is cute. Have a great Valentine day and good time on your vacation.

Linda said...

I guess so you were being naughty! My wish for you this weekend is no wrinkled Valentines!

Maybe after you get back you can do a Friday 55 about your trip to Spain!

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

have fun in spain honey!

smiles, bee
xoxoxoxxoxoxoox

ciara said...

you dirty minx! lol could it be cos your going on vacation :) happy valentine's day and enjoy your time in spain. xoxo

Ron said...

LOVED THIS!

But of course, I'm naughty too!

Tee, hee.

Happy Valentines Day, Akelamalu!

And have a wonderful time in Spain.

You'll be missed!

X

connieemeraldeyes said...

Willy very wrinkly. LOL.

Mojo said...

Scandalous! LOL...

I thought you were going to abandon your penchant for the final twist this week, but no! You just reversed the order of it.

Delightful!

Strumpet said...

Me likey the naughty!

This was great!

And that little smiley heart at the end is simply too cute.

Have a blast in Spain, mi amor, Hula Babe.

MIke Kilgore said...

In Spain? We'll miss ya! Great 55-thanks for stopping by...

Lu' said...

I didn't have to take a bath with you, just read your great story to smile :)

jadey said...

LOL naughty is nice and this is a great and cute 55

G-Man said...

Ake...?
Such a Skamp!!!
Naughty AND Nice 55...
You must be in your 'Holiday Mode'!
Have a safe trip....G

Spiky Zora Jones said...

I love it when you are naughty.

Now, come here so I can give you a spanking...as a reward. :D

Have a Happy Valentine's Day.

Ciao honey.

maryt/theteach said...

I love the poem, Akalamau! I don't care if you're naughty! Happy Valentine's Day! :)

Akelamalu said...

Happy Valentine's Day to you too Flowerpot x

Whatever do you mean Buff ;)

Thanks Connie Happy Valentine's Day to you too. :)

I'll try to do a Spanish 55 when I get back Linda :)

I'll try Bee and you have a great cruise. :)

It's the thought of the sun beating down on my back that turns my thoughts Ciara (wink)

Aw thanks Ron, same to you honey. x

Glad you had a laugh connieemeraldyes :)

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it Mojo :)

Ah just a little bit of fun Strumpet, I'm happy you enjoyed it. x

Yep Spain on Monday Mike I can hardly wait!

Aw you're kind Lu m'deario. x

Thanks Jadey :)

Oh yes I'm definitely in holiday mood G-man ;)


Oh Miss Jones you made me blush! :0


Aw thanks Teach Happy Valentine's Day to you too. x

Dr.John said...

Interesting poem. Enjoy Spain. we will mis your 55.

Donnetta Lee said...

I'm blushing! Happy V Day! Have fun in Spain and share when you get back. D

Finding Pam said...

It's great to be full of so much naughty sometimes! Happy Valentine's day and have a lovely trip to Spain.

Finding Pam said...

It's great to be full of so much naughty sometimes! Happy Valentine's day and have a lovely trip to Spain.

Cloudia said...

Another little gem, my friend! aloha Poet ;-)
And a very happy Valentine's Day to you BOTH-

Jeff W Bach said...

Naughty and hilarious.

Also, a belated Happy Blog-a-birthday to you.

Mona said...

O dear....that bath must be really COLD!!

Shadow said...

naughty but nice. happy valentine's to you!!!

Akelamalu said...

Thanks Dr. John :)

Oh sorry I mde you blushDonnetta x

Yes it is good to be naughty sometimes Pam ;)

Happy Valentine's Day to you too Cloudia and thankyou. x

Glad you enjoyed it Jeff and thanks for the blogversary greetings. x

Nah we just stayed in too long Mona (wink)

Thanks Shadow and the same to you. :)

Lulda Casadaga said...

Naughty and nice and now for the spice in Spain! Happy hearts to you and enjoy your trip...

Akelamalu said...

Thankyou Lulda x

Travis said...

HA! Very clever! That made me laugh.

TopChamp said...

bad girlx

Julia Smith said...

Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha...!

storyteller said...

Hahahhaha ... thanks for the chuckles! Hope your Valentine's Day was lovely.
Hugs and blessings,

MarmiteToasty said...

LMFAO, say NO to wrinkled willies lol....

Finally about to reconnect here AGAIN..... gawds sake...

Have the most super of holidays....

and if you find any wrinkly you know whats, well, take photos LMFAO

x

Emmie said...

ahahaha!!! oo love it!!!! Naughet ake!!

Akelamalu said...

Ah I'm so pleased it made you laugh Trav that was the intention :)

That's me Topchamp! ;)

I take it you enjoyed it Julia :)

I hope your Valentine's Day was good too Storyteller x

If I see any wrinkly you know whats I'll definitely take a photo Marmie!

Glad you liked it Emmie x

cheshire wife said...

Time for a holiday, I think. Hope you have a good one!

evalinn said...

Funny! lol :-D

Skittles said...

Nothing wrong with being naughty. :) Come see my Let's Be Honest post.. hahaha.

Real Live Lesbian said...
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Real Live Lesbian said...

Hahahaha! I bet you can fix that though! ;)

Jo Beaufoix said...

Hee hee. Love it. Sorry I've been MIA lovely Akela. It's been so good to read today. Hugs. And happy blogiversary too. xoxoxoxox

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