Friday, 23 May 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 28 Relax


Surrounded by candles, the bath water fragrant and frothy.

Champagne on ice, glass ready, just what she needed after the day she’d had.

He’d gone to so much trouble preparing it, how thoughtful of him.

It could only get better.

“Are you relaxed honey?” he smiled

Just before he threw the hairdryer into the water!

Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The object of the game is to write a story using exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.


Jennifer H said...

Ha! Brilliant. I'll be suspicious if my husband ever draws a bath for me now.

ciara said...

omgoodness, ake! you've been getting on the dark side lately lol :) i love it! another fabulous 55 :)

ciara said...

p.s. mine will be up in 15 mins lol

Flowerpot said...

Excellent Ak - another winner!

acey said...

hahaha. ciara's comment is cute. made me laugh.

this 1's entertaining, akelamalu. =D

James Goodman, Author said...

lol, now that's a great twist. :D Excellent tt, AK.

buffalodickdy said...

You're sort of intrigued by murder, aren't you?

G-Man said...

Now lets hope that there was a circuit breaker in that house!!!
Great job sweetie!!
Thanks for playing!!!
And maybe you just just "shower" for a while((wink))..
I just LOVE Pearls..xox

Marianne said...

Ooh, didn't see it coming!
Also, I've nearly read the entire memoir about your grandmother's life - it's great - I couldn't resist as my grandmother was also called Kit. x M

CrazyCath said...

As always - a great twist in your tales! And it just feels so appropriate to me after the day I had yesterday!
I'm less frazzled today... ;0)

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

oh no! good one again!

smiles, bee

Momma said...

EEK! I didn't expect that ending!

Peace - D

Dumdad said...

Hannibal Lector be afeared - Akela is on the prowl!

Linda said...

Hmm, I'm beginning to see a pattern here to some of your Flash Fictions!

Dianne said...

Cool! Love the dark side!

storyteller said...

Well done! I’m finally learning to anticipate a twist in these Friday Fictions. You’ve got a devious imagination my dear ;--)
Hugs and blessings,

Jo Beaufoix said...

Blimey I didn't expect that Akela, hee hee. Brilliant.

the mother of this lot said...

That actually made me jump!

the mother of this lot said...

That actually made me jump!

Travis said...

GAH! Now that caught me by surprise.

Julia Smith said...

Mwahaha... sinister in just the right way.

And tag! You're it!

Sandi McBride said...

Now that gave me cold chills, lol...then a hot flash...hmm, good read!

Donnetta Lee said...

Hi, "A". I didn't see that one coming at all! What a guy. So accommodating. Gotta love him. Donnetta

Ron said...

OH MY GOD, Akelamalu...between last Friday's 55 and this one...I would SWEAR your planning something wonderful!!

Damn...what an electrifying way to go!

tee, hee!

Thoroughly enjoyed it, dear lady!

Have a great weekend!

Akelamalu said...

LOL me too Jennifer!

Mmm yes, I have rather haven't I Ciara

Thanks Flowerpot :)

Cheers Acey x

Why thankyou James :)

Now you've mentioned it I guess I am Buff

Good idea g-man ((wink))

I'm so pleased you're enjoying reading KIT Marianne, thankyou. xx

Good to hear you're calmer now Cath x

Thankyou Bee x

Ah it worked then Momma! :)

LOL you make me laugh Dumdad :)

I'll have to change the pattern now then Linda ((wink))

Cheers Dianne

I've never been called devious before Storyteller ((wink))

Glad you enjoyed it Jo x

Really MOTL? Cool!

Oh great Trav, that was the intention.

I'll check out the tag Julia, and thanks.

Thankyou Sandi :)

Not the sort you'd want to live with though eh Donnetta? ;)

I think I'd better do a lighter one for next week Ron :)

Mona said...

OMG! That is just terrible!

I mean the plan!

The 55 is great!

girl with the mask said...

Your 55's have taken a sinister turn of late, missus! Something you are not telling us...?!

CG said...

You are evil!! Didn't see THAT coming!!

the teach said...

Ak, you are funny and EVIL! HA!

Akelamalu said...

Thankyou Mona :)

Mmmm they have haven't they GIM? I've no idea why :0

Moi evil CG? ;)

Funny and Evil me Teach? I suppose that was a bit evil!

Sometimes Saintly Nick said...

I was not prepared for the last line. However, I should have been.


KB said...

The last line was so unexpected. I love it.

Odat said...

Yes,,,evil!!! hehe.
Great 55!

Akelamalu said...

You didn't guess Nick?

Thanks KB, I enjoyed yours too. :)

I know it is evil Odat ;)

Anonymous said...

Yikes! This one took a gruesome turn!!

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Misty Dawn said...

And, suddenly the rest of her day didn't matter anymore.

Whoa! I kinda like it when you get that little 'evil-twitch' to ya ;-) Course, then again, I AM a fan of Mysteries and Horror. hehe

LOVE it Ake!

Akelamalu said...

It did rather didn't it Citizen? :(

I like mysteries and horror too Misty :)

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