Grandma at Grandma's Goulash provides a picture and a word prompt for this Microfiction Meme and the rules are use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words.
Want more challenge? Use the word of the week in your story. This part is optional.
Three men in a boat, will they conquer their fear of water and sharks?
"Come in boat number 9, your time is up!" called the boat hire man.
"Come in boat number 9, your time is up!" called the boat hire man.
17 comments:
Nice one. And I bet the shark charged too much.
Drama, made ridiculous by your second line! Masterful and wry as always dear!
Enjoy your week!
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Ha! That made me snort my tea!
Haha, I like your pun Anthony
Ah, glad to hear you got the joke Cloudia x
Oops sorry Elain ;)
Very good! You really have a feel for microfiction, this is a real little story despite its tiny length!
Gosh hope they don't get excited and tip over the boat, lol!
hugs
Sandi
rub a dub dub three men in a tub .. well done!
Wonderful, A.K. I'm with Anthony's pun about those human sharks. They always overcharge.
My comment,[:)}, have them put in another quarter for some more time.
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Well gee, I guess that's one way to conquer a fear, eh??
.... and not a minute too soon, they think.
Brilliant once again, m'dear!
*two thumbs up*
And I have to chime in with Jenny and say that you really have a feel and talent for microfiction because you can say so much in so few words!
Have a lovely Monday!
X
Why thankyou Jenny. :)
Especially as they think there are sharks in there Sandi LOL
Cheers Daryl :)
Ha ha thanks Jim
I guess so Linda ;)
I think they were relieved Valerie LOL
Aw thankyou Ron you're too kind. xx
I was anticipating three panic attacks until I read the 2nd line. You and Anthony made a great duo on this one. :)
Great job! Sitting in a small boat can be interesting when there are things like sharks and alligators around.
Ah.....the twist! Thats what you do well!
Maggie X
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Thankyou Grandma, I'm honoured to be put in the same class as Anthony. :)
Wouldn't catch me in one Beach! LOL
Thankyou so much Maggie, you're very kind. x
Oh, wonderful. I love the second line.
K
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