Friday, 11 July 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 35 Just a Job

Just A Job

Hello darlin’, lookin’ for a good time? she said peering seductively through heavily mascaraed eyes.

I’m doing a special offer at the moment only £20.

'Ere open the door and we’ll go somewhere quiet.

It’s not far and we won’t be disturbed.

She waited for his answer.

“Fantastic” said the director “You got the part”.

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ciara said...

good one, ake! here i thought you were going tart-y on us. ha ha :) mine is up early! lol

Flowerpot said...

I love the picture too!

Real Live Lesbian said...

Great pic and tons of story in a tiny amount of words!

Of course, I want to know MORE!!!!

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

now i wonder what the part was for??? ha ha ha

smiles, bee

Linda said...

You wicked, wicked woman - love it!

Akelamalu said...

Tarty me Ciara??? Never ;)

Thanks Flowerpot

Well the play was a huge success of course RLL! :)

A companion of course Bee ;)

I am naughty Linda, I admit it! :)

Mona said...

Ouch! is it the casting couch!?

Lol! what else! After all it does exist!

Marianne said...

Hilarious! You're so good at these, I love them. The pictures are hilarious too, great work Ak x M

Ron said...



You are so CREATIVE, dear lady!

(I can actually hear Donna Summers singing, "She Works Hard for the Money"!)

Thanks for yet, another enjoyable Flash 55!

Have FAB weekend!

Mike Golch said...

Good one LUV. Hugs and Blessing. That's my story and I'm sticking to it.

storyteller said...

Yup ... ya surprised me again. Amazing how you produce these clever little twists that 'get us' even when we're anticipating them. Well done!
Hugs and blessings,

Mojo said...

Clever twist there at the end dearie. Like it a lot.

Rebicmel said...

Woot!! This was a great 55.

Have a nice weekend

Kaknu said...

hehehe - I like the twist at the end. ;-)

Dianne said...

excellent! and she went on to have a wonderful long career as "Harriet, the Hooker with a Heart".

smarmoofus said...

Ake! I love it! *laughing* You're great with those twists.


Travis said...

Have a lovely weekend dear!

Sandi McBride said...

Why you have surprised me...never knew you could play the tart, lol! Well done, brava!

G-Man said...

You just dangle the carrot, then snatch it away...hehehehe
Great Job Ake!!!!
I loved this 55..Thanks for playing, and have a great week-end!
Galen xo

Akelamalu said...

Possibly Mona ;)

Thanks Marianne :)

You are so right Ron, that song would go perfectly with it! Thanks honey. x

Cheers Mike :)

It's great when people say the twist got them, thanks Storyteller x

Welcome Mojo, glad you enjoyed it.

You have a good weekend too Rebicmel and thanks.

Thanks for stopping by Kaknu glad you enjoyed it.

Harriet, the Hooker with a Heart - now why didn't I think of that Dianne ? I love it. x

Thanks smarmoofus, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. :)

And the same to you Trav, thanks honey.

I have a lot of hidden depths Sandi :)

That's what women do g-man ((wink, wink))

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