He looked down, the drop seemed enormous.
Nothing to cling onto.
He'd have to take the chance and just drop.
He prayed he would have a soft landing.
Holding on to the sides he shifted his body into the cavity
and dropped.
He hated going up into the loft, especially when the ladder fell over!
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23 comments:
I loved it...!
Still giggling. You did it again, Pearl. I swear no-one else makes me laugh as much.
love the action words and the imagery they bring forth,
a fun 55.
well done.
ha. i always wanted to install a rope in ours just in case...
GERONIMO!!!!!!!
(Do Brits yell that?)
Loved your 55 Pearlie Mae.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End!!
Excellent! :-D
Once again.....BRAVA!
Your twisty endings ALWAYS get me!!!
Have a glorious weekend, m'dear!
X
LOL watch out below..... Great 55 as usual my friend.
i hope he landed on a soft bed of hay!
smiles, bee
xoxoxooxox
LOL. And here I had visions of canyons. Well done.
- Alice
Cheers Kochuravi:)
I'm happy to make you smile Valerie x
So pleased you enjoyed it Jingle :)
Our ladder is firmly hooked now Brian as this happened to me! LOL
Not Geronimo G-man more Aaaarrrrrrgggggghhhhhhhh! LOL
Thanks Sharon
Gotcha again eh Ron x
Glad you liked it Thom
Or carpet at least Bee LOL
Oh the twist got you eh Alice? :)
Nice one! (Again).
I hate going up in the loft anyway! Great 55 as usual
The Loft! Ah.....but that's Another Storey.......
Geez, my heart was pounding as I read those first few lines. Very funny.
one never knows WHERE you are going!
Aloha from Waikiki
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Excellent tension, and the twist was fantastic.
Hehehe! Hope he landed on some hay! The tension till the last line was very well done!
Cheers Dumdad :)
Me too AJ, ever since this happened to me! LOL
You have a story about the loft Tony? Do tell!
Oh thanks Belinda, exactly the reaction I was hoping for.
Ah that the mysterious part of me Cloudia LOL
Why thankyou Beach, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.
Or at least something soft Leo. Thanks glad you liked it.
Very clever as per usual!
Me? I'd still be stuck up in that loft!
You've created a clear and complete picture in your 55...well done.
That was a good one!
Hey I thought you were supposed to be in America.
I've got over Anna's FAKED death... I can't believe she did that. Bloody hell.
Thanks Linda. When it happened to me it was a difficult decision whether to stay up there or chance dropping and breaking my leg!
Cheers Laurax
Glad you enjoyed it Gleds. We got back from America on 17th May!
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