Monday, 1 November 2010

Microfiction Monday #26



Susan at Stony River hosts this fun theme each Monday, so do pop over and read the others who have signed Mr. Linky. The rules are thus:

Every Monday Susan will post a picture for the subject of your story. Microfiction means the shortest of short stories. Think Aesop's fables, comic strips, or even jokes: complete stories that can be told in under a minute. For this game, the limit is a tweetable 140 characters or fewer, including punctuation and spaces.

Here's today's picture and my contribution.



Pretty Polly’s smile hid a dark secret.




She wasn’t what she appeared to be,


 
as the other guests at the Halloween party were about to discover.



39 comments:

  1. Oooooh-er. That's scary ... she looks so innocent.

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  2. The mind boggles.... wonder what she's planning?

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  3. Be afraid, be very afraid!!!!!!

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  4. Dangerous things can come in pretty small packages! Well done!

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  5. ooooh er - what is she then?!!

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  6. Hmmm, interesting story. I wonder what she's up to :-)

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  7. Ooooo! I wonder what she really is?

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  8. Ooops! Polly doesn't sound like a Pollyanna.

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

    EXCELLENT as usual, m'dear!

    Have a marvi Monday!

    X

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  9. Foreshadow of doom - an errie idea, Akelamalu!

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  10. Ah, you gotta keep an eye on those cute ones, their sweet looks can indeed hide a devil! What a great one for the day!! Enjoy your week!

    Sylvia

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  11. A mystery party game.
    Who is that cute little girl that came late to the party???
    Good one, love a mystery.

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  12. Yes she does look innocent Valerie but looks can be deceiving. ;)

    I guess we'll never know AJ ;0

    Thanks Jabblog :)

    They need to be Dumdad

    You're so right SouthLakesMom ;)

    She can be anything your imagination comes up with Flowerpot :)

    Mischief Sashindoubutsu!

    Whatever your imagination desires Nitebyrd

    She's definitely NOT Pollyana Ron;)

    Indeed Eric

    The cute ones are usually the worse Sylvia LOL

    They're about to find out Peggy LOL

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  13. Will we have to wait until next year to find out what the secret is? ! lol

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  14. polly is prob an ax murderer lol

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  15. Ooh... a mystery in the making - love it!

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  16. LOL Julia

    You can just use your imagination and decide on the outcome Jinksy :)

    You could be right Ciara ;)

    Glad you enjoyed it gospelwriter :)

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  17. nah, she's a guy in drag!

    smiles, bee
    xoxoxoxoxoxo

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  18. Yikes! I knew there was a reason that kid's smile gave me the creeps!

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  19. you are BRILLIANT



    as usual


    Aloha from Honolulu खुश दीपावली

    Comfort Spiral

    ><}}(°>

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  20. Oh, that is scary. I wonder what she has planned!

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  21. I think she tried trick-or-treating here last night. Scary little creature!

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  22. Who knows what evil lurks in the hearts of innocent looking witches?!?

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  23. Polly is a sophisticated bag lady and her cat is transgender.

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  24. She does look a little too good to be true.

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  25. brrrrr..rrr..rrr...you have my teeth a-chattering! When innocence is a cover for something...horrible, it's way worse than if the horribleness is all showing!!

    Hi sweetie, Just so you know...new blog is total disaster. I broke it already! :-( I can't get to my posts, and I'm returning (actually, with relief! :-) ) to my old haunting ground at words that flow...I haven't got the energy to go through the whole moving process again :-S

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  26. Ha! That's pretty much what I thought of her when I first saw that picture.

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  27. Oh I may have to join in on these memes. Nice complete story for the readers if not the party guests.

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  28. aakelamalu: See that's what everyone always said...you have to watch out for the innocent looking ones.

    no wonder no one trusted me...and with good cause.

    wha-hahahahaha....BOO!

    later sweetie. xxx

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  29. So much deftly left to the imagination.

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  30. Never trust a sweet, seemingly innocent child!

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  31. LOL you could be right Bee ;)

    Ah you're perceptive Hope ;)

    Why thankyou Cloudia x

    Something terrible SeptemberMom :0

    Glad you liked it Susan :)

    Well it was Halloween Trav LOL

    Oh you've met Pretty Polly then Quilly? ;)

    I don't want to find out Linda, do you? ;)

    Hey you could be right Dave!

    She definitely looks innocent doesn't she KB?

    Her smile is chilling Annelisa, you're right.

    You saw through her smile too SAW!

    Yes it is Ninotaziz. ;)

    Oh yes, do join in Jamie, the more the merrier!

    LOL I'm sure your sweet smile was genuine Spiky! (wink)

    Of course San :)

    Could be a big mistake Shrinky ;)

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  32. Hmmm...I was going to say looks can be deceiving, but I see you already did!

    She is going to do something bad with that broom, I just know it!

    Pretty Polly is not too jolly.

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  33. haha ~ I need to exercise my imagination now and then. Enjoy your Sunday!

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  34. I enjoy writing without a conclusion giving my readers something to think about Patti :)

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