Friday, 3 May 2013

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #216 Hiding Place......


"I'll hide them in the plantpots" she thought "they will be safe in there."

She quickly planted the first one, carefully covering it with the soil

Repeating the sequence she secreted a second, third and fourth in different pots.

"Now I just have to remember where I've hidden them when winter arrives" thought the squirrel.


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17 comments:

  1. MorningAJ3 May 2013 at 07:53

    Oh that's clever! I never saw the squirrel coming!

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  2. anthonynorth3 May 2013 at 08:05

    Nice twist at the end there.

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  3. Cloudia3 May 2013 at 08:15

    Sounds like you observed this in your own flowerpots. :-) you are the master of mysteriously leading us on till the punchline!

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  4. Commander Zaius3 May 2013 at 09:01

    Nicely done!

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  5. Valerie3 May 2013 at 09:14

    Brilliant. At first I thought you were hiding keys :O)

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  6. Akelamalu3 May 2013 at 11:00

    Ah my little twist worked then AJ :)

    Thanks Anthony x

    I have seen the squirrels doing exactly that Cloudia. Thanks honey. x

    Cheers Beach x

    I was hoping that's what folk would think Valerie :)

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  7. Secret Agent Woman3 May 2013 at 11:32

    I've caught the squirrel digging in my plant pots, so I know this to be true!

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  8. izzy3 May 2013 at 12:34

    Very creative, thanks!

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  9. mrsnesbitt3 May 2013 at 14:30

    So you Pearl lol!

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  10. Daryl3 May 2013 at 14:39

    cleverly done

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  11. G-Man3 May 2013 at 16:18

    You have Squirrels in England?
    I know you have LOTS of Nuts!
    Welcome back AKE...YAY!!!!!!!
    Loved your Burial 55
    Thanks for playing, thanks for returning to the fold, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  12. Ron3 May 2013 at 16:45

    "Now I just have to remember where I've hidden them when winter arrives" thought the squirrel."

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Awesomely clever finish!

    And I often wonder HOW they find those nuts after they bury them?!?

    Great Flash Fiction!

    Have a lovely weekend, m'dear!

    X

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  13. Akelamalu3 May 2013 at 18:45

    Yep me too SAW

    Thanks Izzy :)

    Cheers Denise x

    Thankyou Daryl x

    Well after the omen how could I not come back G? ;)

    I have often wondered that myself Ron, I think they must have a sixth sense don't you?

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  14. Other Mary4 May 2013 at 13:06

    Your unexpected closing made me smile. Thanks!

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  15. CrystalChick5 May 2013 at 16:43

    OH, squirrels know exactly where everything they want and need is. And if it's inside a house, they will go in for it. haha!

    Good flash fiction!

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  16. Akelamalu6 May 2013 at 12:24

    I'm happy to make you smile Other Mary :)

    You're so right there CrystalChick! Thanks.

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  17. Maggie May6 May 2013 at 13:40

    Ah yes....... otherwise she would tip them all out all over the place whilst looking! Smiles!
    Maggie x

    Nuts in May

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