Friday, 9 November 2012

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #210 Slimmer of the Year....






She hadn't wanted to go on a diet but they told her she must.

Her calories had been cut by half.

At first she was starving but, as she began to lose weight, she became more active and that was fun.

Now here she was - a fitter, 

slimline Labrador - Kennel Club's Slimmer Of The Year!



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22 comments:

  1. Oh bless! I bet she's happier for it. Great 55.

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  2. aw, i bet pups can get around a little better now as well you know...

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  3. was it carbs she was counting, lol? Great job!
    Sandi

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  4. I'm sure she was AJ :)

    Cheers Beach x

    Much, much better Brian

    She cut out the dog biscuits for sure Sandi LOL

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  5. Haha - that's great. I've heard it said that if a dog is overweight it's owner needs more exercise.

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  6. Oh, bless you,love dog tale even if it's short!

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  7. Miss Gwennie the corgi is on a diet too, along with mom and dad. Corgis are always wanting to eat.

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  8. Puppies are generally grateful for whatever they get! so nice to read this, I have to put my LabX on a
    diet here and there- usually in the spring!

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  9. "slimline Labrador - Kennel Club's Slimmer Of The Year!"

    HAHAHAHHAHAHAAHA! You get me EVERY TIME with your clever and brilliant endings!

    Well done. WELL done!

    Have a super weekend, m'dear!

    X

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  10. I bet all the male dogs are after her now.

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  11. No kidding, who wants a fat dog?
    Now a Hot Dog? Thats different!
    Loved your canine 55 Ake...
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  12. Haha! that had me fooled for a moment :) maybe cause I know how she feels!

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  13. I was fooled as well, Pearl. It's good though, we all know that Labradors are prone to excess weight if we don't watch their diets.

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  14. It is SO easy to put my dog on a diet... wish I had someone in control of feeding me! :)

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  15. your words never fail to please and reward me! Thanks



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  16. I am a certified dog lover and this is a very cool tale for me :)

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  17. I wonder if she has really beady Chocolate Drop Eyes..?

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  18. I should send this to my mother - I keep telling her she's let her dogs get too fat.

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  19. Haha that could be true OtherMary!

    Glad you like it ReBelle :)

    Good luck to Gwennie (and Mum and Dad)then BankerChick LOL

    Puppies are always hungry Izzy!

    Thankyou Ron x

    Chees Dumdad x

    Oh yes but she can run away from them now Cheshire Wife LOL

    A hot dog is preferable to a fat dog for sure G-man ;)

    Ah the little twist at the end worked then Jenny :)

    Oh the twist worked for you too Valerie, thanks.

    Me too Margaret, me too.

    Thanks Cloudia x

    Indeed Mama Zen

    All Labradors have chocolate drop eyes don't they Gleds? ;)

    Well if you think it would help please do SAW ;)

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