Monday, 28 May 2012

Succinctly Yours - A Microfiction Meme #52



Grandma at Grandma's Goulash provides a picture and a word prompt for this Microfiction Meme and the rules are use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words.


Want more challenge? Use the word of the week in your story. This part is optional.


This week's word is PRIVILEGE here's the picture and my offering, using the picture and word of the week  in 140 characters, including spaces and punctuation.


The residents of the nursing home were privileged, so visitors were led to believe, but then no-one knows what goes on behind closed doors.

27 comments:

  1. That sounds like the voice of experience! I hope it wasn't anyone dear to you.

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  2. I think anyone with a vulnerable loved one, always fears if this is the case (shudder)..

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  3. Let's hope happy things were happening behind those doors. It's always a worry for families when their loved ones have to go in a home.

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  4. ", but then no-one knows what goes on behind closed doors."

    That is so true because my mother use to work in nursing home.

    So sad the stuff that goes on.

    Have a great week, m'dear!

    Excellent Succinctly Yours!

    X

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  5. No one knows, indeed. There are some terrible stories come out.

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  6. Ooh, I like the O Henry surprise ending. Indeed, sometimes a beautiful exterior hides a frightful interior.

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  7. No,no, nothing like that AJ x

    Yes they do Shrinky

    Indeed it is Valerie

    Quite Dianne

    Some stories beggar belief don't they Ron?

    Yes there are some horror stories Anthony :(

    Glad you liked it Pat

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  9. I love it, Akei! Just love it!

    Did they sing this Charley Rich country western song in he U.K. back in its day?

    Behind Closed Doors

    My baby makes me proud
    Lord, don't she make me proud
    She never makes a scene
    By hanging all over me in a crowd
    'Cause people like to talk
    Lord, don't they love to talk
    But when they turn out the lights
    I know she'll be leaving with me

    And when we get behind closed doors
    Then she lets her hair hang down
    And she makes me glad that I'm a man
    Oh, no-one knows what goes on behind closed doors

    My baby makes me smile
    Lord, don't she make me smile
    She's never far away
    Or too tired to say: "I want you"
    She's always a lady, just like a lady should be
    But when they turn out the lights
    She's still a baby to me

    'Cause when we get behind closed doors
    Then she lets her hair hang down
    And she makes me glad that I'm a man
    Oh, no-one knows what goes on behind closed doors
    Behind closed doors


    I loved that song too, it made me feel special, like I was the "me" in the song. :)

    I need to add my source,
    Lyricstime.com Behind Closed Doors
    ..

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  10. sadly true .. well writ!

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  11. Indeed they did, Jim, it's one of my favourite songs too!

    Thanks Daryl x

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  12. I know Trav, the opulent surroundings made me wonder what was going on in the background.

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  13. Fortunately my experience with nursing homes is limited. There are good ones and not so good ones.

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  14. This is chillingly close to the truth. And even the nicest surroundings can't compensate for the comforts of home and family.

    Succinct and perceptive.

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  15. So true and sad. Nursing homes are as bad as hospitals, no one should be left alone in them.

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  16. If nursing homes all looked like the building in the picture, I think we'd be clamouring to get in one!

    But you're right; none of us know what goes on behind closed doors.

    CJ x

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  17. Oooo, creepy!

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  18. My mum's in a home at the moment but thankfully she seems to be very happy there!

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  19. I know there are some really good ones Bankerchick.

    Thanks Grandma

    It's my worst fear Calico


    Happens more than we know I think Beach, sadly.

    Yes but looks can be deceiving can't they CJ? :(

    Yes it is Dumdad

    You found a good one Flowerpot that's good. :)

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  20. Wicked take on that picture!

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  21. you have named a primal fear! You naughty-honest girl!




    Friendly Aloha from Waikiki
    Comfort Spiral
    > < } } (°>

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  22. Ah yes, how very true. I worked very briefly at a nursing home and it was quite sad.

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  23. My parents were privileged to be in a care facility that didn't look particularly posh but where they received good and tender care. We all appreciated it.
    Excellent take on the prompt.
    K

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  24. The nursing home my mom was just in following her stroke looked NOTHING like that one from the outside! Of course like you say, no one knows what goes on behind those closed doors and most of us would really never want to find out either!

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