Friday, 27 January 2012

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #187 The Best..



They are all clamouring for me, wanting the best that money can buy - that's me.

I can't remember how I got into it,

It is a lucrative business that keeps me in luxury.

My prices are high, but they are getting the best.

All the stables want their prize mares to breed with The Stallion.



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23 comments:

  1. Melanie27 January 2012 at 07:14

    well done!!

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  2. A Daft Scots Lass27 January 2012 at 08:43

    I'm taking part too, today.

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  3. MorningAJ27 January 2012 at 09:16

    I like that!

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  4. Valerie27 January 2012 at 09:58

    Very good, although my mind was going down the wrong track...grins.

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  5. Commander Zaius27 January 2012 at 10:12

    Great writing!

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  6. Akelamalu27 January 2012 at 11:08

    Cheers Melanie :)

    Oh good Scot's Lass

    Glad you like it AJ

    Whatever were you thinking Valerie? ;)

    thanks Beach x

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  7. Brian Miller27 January 2012 at 13:00

    he sure has a hard job...

    lol.

    yeah you had me wondering there for a moment...smiles.

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  8. Margaret27 January 2012 at 13:46

    The life of a stallion!

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  9. cheshire wife27 January 2012 at 14:23

    It's a hard life!

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  10. Linda27 January 2012 at 15:00

    That's just got to be every stallion's dream job, huh?

    Have a great weekend, m'dear!

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  11. katie eggeman27 January 2012 at 15:29

    This is a good one.What a business.

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  12. anthonynorth27 January 2012 at 15:48

    An enjoyable stud-y.

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  13. Ron27 January 2012 at 16:19

    BRAVA!

    As always, you forever impress me with your cleverness and gift with words!

    LOVE the ending!

    Have a super weekend, m'dear!

    X

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  14. Akelamalu27 January 2012 at 17:08

    Yep it's a hard job but one that has to be done Brian. The twist had you fooled eh?

    Yes indeed Margaret ;)

    Yes gotta feel sorry for him Cheshire Wife LOL

    Of course it is Lindda lol Thanks, same to you honey. x

    Thanks BankerChick :)

    Nice play on the word Anthony ;)

    Cheers Ron, glad you enjoyed it. x

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  15. Deb27 January 2012 at 18:44

    Loved the unexpected turn at the end ! Thought I knew where we were going and then, zip, you surprised me! You are one clever, creative writer. Someday I might just give Flash Fiction a try. It might help me be less wordy ! Happy weekend.

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  16. Steve Isaak27 January 2012 at 23:38

    Interesting, different read (in a good way). =)

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  17. G-Man28 January 2012 at 01:30

    What a horribly BORING life that would be..Mounting and eating, Mounting and eating...All the while wishing he was a Polo Pony!
    Poor Thing.
    Loved your Equine 55 Ake
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  18. Akelamalu28 January 2012 at 10:16

    So pleased you enjoyed it and the twist worked Deb. Yes, do try it I think you'd realy enjoy writing 55s. x

    Thanks Steve :)

    Oh yes that would be a boring life, wouldn't it G-man? LOL

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  19. Maude Lynn28 January 2012 at 19:25

    Excellent, Ake!

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  20. Shrinky29 January 2012 at 11:55

    Ha, I love how you always have a surprise punch at the end - excellent stuff, me dear!

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  21. Akelamalu29 January 2012 at 12:55

    Thanks Mama Zen :)

    I try my best Shrinky, glad you like them. :)

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  22. Secret Agent Woman29 January 2012 at 16:35

    Don't you wonder if they even much care?

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  23. Julia Phillips Smith29 January 2012 at 17:09

    I can't remember how I got into it

    LOL! Lucky him.

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