Friday, 12 November 2010

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #141 Colours....



Mmmmm, what colour? she thought.


It has to be something dramatic, maybe Mandarin or Sunshine Yellow?


Something to impact with the black.


Then she saw it - Fuchsia - that was it!


She removed the lid from the tin of paint and smiled in delight


before promptly tipping the contents over the bonnet of the love-rat's car.


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27 comments:

  1. MorningAJ12 November 2010 at 07:50

    Oh I wish! There have been times in my past when I really would have liked to do that.

    Excellent!

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  2. anthonynorth12 November 2010 at 08:29

    But such a pretty colour. Hope he appreciates it :-)

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  3. Belinda Munoz12 November 2010 at 09:42

    A colorful release! Enjoyable 55!

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  4. mrsnesbitt12 November 2010 at 09:56

    A wonderful start to my day! Loved it! I have grossly exceeded 55 today - couldn't help it! lol!

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  5. joanna12 November 2010 at 10:47

    Oh a wild child--- interesting and colorful 55er,

    cheers,
    joanny

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  6. Valerie12 November 2010 at 11:31

    Oh this is a great 55. Obviously not a penny was wasted when she bought the paint.

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  7. Brian Miller12 November 2010 at 11:57

    hehe..unless of course you are he...smiles.

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  8. Daryl12 November 2010 at 13:34

    So much more effective than 'keying' it

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  9. Suz12 November 2010 at 14:42

    Oh lordie...what a way to start my day!
    that was so satisfying to read!!!
    and you held it back until the end...great piece of writing!
    Thanks for visiting my garden wench blog..btw

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  10. Austin12 November 2010 at 15:16

    he he, good one

    Spiderman's Ride is my 55 this week.

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  11. Ron12 November 2010 at 15:44

    "before promptly tipping the contents over the bonnet of the love-rat's car."

    HAHAHAHAHAHA...way to go, girl!

    *smiling in delight*

    Tee, hee!

    Fab 55, m'dear!

    Enjoy your weekend!

    X

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  12. Akelamalu12 November 2010 at 16:03

    I think there are a lot of women thinking the same thing AJ!


    Somehow I don't think he will Anthony. ;)


    Quite Belinda LOL


    Glad you enjoyed it Denise x


    Thanks Joanny


    Well worth the money I'd say Valerie!


    Well yes of course Brian ;)


    That was the alternative revenge Daryl ;)


    Glad you enjoyed it Suz :)


    Cheers Austin


    Thank Ron glad you liked it. x

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  13. Bubba12 November 2010 at 16:43

    Love-rat? I'm not sure what that is for certain, but it can't be good! Amusing 55, Akelamalu!

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  14. G-Man12 November 2010 at 16:58

    Bonnet...hehehehe
    Love hath no fury eh Ake?
    Loved your 55 My Dear.
    Exquisite!!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  15. Spiky Zora Jones12 November 2010 at 19:18

    akelamalu: Oh my...is she a bad girl or just and artist without canvas to express herself? hehehe

    hehehe...she did him a favor...Fuchsia colored cars is the vogue, I hear.

    have a fab wekend sweetie. xxx

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  16. secret agent woman12 November 2010 at 23:43

    Love-rat. snort

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  17. PattiKen13 November 2010 at 00:13

    Oh, I like her style! Good one.

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  18. Empress Bee (of the high sea)13 November 2010 at 01:13

    the car? oh no! ha ha ha

    smiles, bee
    xoxoxoxoxoxo

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  19. Linda13 November 2010 at 01:18

    Leave it to a woman to want to make sure that it's just the right color!

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  20. Mona13 November 2010 at 05:15

    Chuckle! I wonder why revengeful lovers always go after their ex 's cars! :D

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  21. Akelamalu13 November 2010 at 11:24

    A love-rat is a man who cheats on a woman Eric. Glad you found it amusing. :)

    I think you call it a hood G-man and you're right hell hath no fury.......

    Of course she did him a favour Spiky ;)

    You know he deserved it SAW, don't you?

    Glad you liked it Pattiken

    Yes Bee, his car!

    Well we are considerate like that aren't we Linda? LOL

    Well they do say a man's car is an extension of you know what so that's why, I guess Mona! ;)

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  22. Charlene Amsden14 November 2010 at 00:08

    Nothing like a splash of color to brighten up a dark paint job! LOL!

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  23. Travis Cody14 November 2010 at 02:45

    Oh my!

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  24. Akelamalu14 November 2010 at 13:01

    That's what I thought Quilly ;)

    Indeed Trav ;)

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  25. Shrinky14 November 2010 at 19:33

    Oh, I am SO with her.. teehee!

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  26. Nessa14 November 2010 at 22:12

    You go girl. Revenge with flare.

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  27. Akelamalu17 November 2010 at 13:14

    I knew you would be Shrinky ;0

    You got it Nessa LOL

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