Susan at Stony River hosts this fun theme each Monday, so do pop over and read the others who have signed Mr. Linky. The rules are thus:
Every Monday Susan will post a picture for the subject of your story. Microfiction means the shortest of short stories. Think Aesop's fables, comic strips, or even jokes: complete stories that can be told in under a minute. For this game, the limit is a tweetable 140 characters or fewer, including punctuation and spaces.
Here's today's picture and my contribution.
Every Monday Susan will post a picture for the subject of your story. Microfiction means the shortest of short stories. Think Aesop's fables, comic strips, or even jokes: complete stories that can be told in under a minute. For this game, the limit is a tweetable 140 characters or fewer, including punctuation and spaces.
Here's today's picture and my contribution.
Jake decided to stop at Coolville, he hoped it would live up to its name.
He was rather hot and bothered since dumping the hitchhikers body.
With a name like that it probably won't! Of course, the hitchhiker will never know! Good twist.
ReplyDeleteI knew hitchhiking was dangerous!
ReplyDeleteAh!!1 nice take :)
ReplyDeleteWicked and dark, yet witty! Just what I expect from someone like yourself! lol!
ReplyDeletelesson: no hitchhiking! yikes! ha ha ha
ReplyDeletesmiles, bee
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Oooh, good one!!!
ReplyDeleteYou are brilliant, m' dear!
ReplyDeleteThis was faaabulous! As usual!
Happy Monday to you!
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Very clever as usual. Itsno wonder he has to cool down. Excellent my friend. :)
ReplyDeleteYou have a macabre streak in you!
ReplyDeleteLove that twist!
ReplyDeleteAnother gruesome story - I like! Poor hitchhiker, though.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week x
So many bodies littered around the internet today! Must be Microfiction Monday! Smiles!
ReplyDeleteWhoa. I wasn't expecting that. Good job.
ReplyDeleteSinister...Muahahaha
ReplyDeleteThat Jack, never satisfied always looking for more!
ReplyDeleteThere are many murderers amongst you today....must be Monday. :)
ReplyDeleteEew, creepy, but funny, too. Reminds me not to ever hitch-hike again....last time was in 1972 in England. My mother wasn't too thrilled about that.
ReplyDeleteCrikey.
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Eeek, watch out Coolville!! Another classic, Akelamalu - great stuff.
ReplyDeleteAahhh, Akemalu...We are of one mind on this.
ReplyDeleteYou're right Morning AJ, the hitchiker will never know!
ReplyDeleteIt definitely was dangerous on that stretch of road Valerie ;)
Thanks Dr Chandana :)
Why thankyou Mrs N, how kind. :)
Good advice Bee ;)
Cheers CrystalChick :)
Aw thanks Ron x
Yes Thom, hopefully Coolville will live up to it's name. ;)
Who me Dumdad? ;)
Glad you liked it Mama Zen :)
So pleased you enjoyed it Ellie
LOL it's surprising how many of us have the same idea isn't it SouthLakesMom? LOL
Thanks Granhy Sue :)
Yes it is sinister G-man, just the way I was feeling I guess. ;)
Possibly looking for more hitchikers Quilly ;)
Strange isn't it ?
I used to hitchike all the time when I was a teenager Pat but I wouldn't advise anyone to do it these days! :0
LOL did it shock you Dave?
Aw cheers Shrinky x
Seems a lot of us are on the same wavelength today Ninotaziz.
Looks like a good place to dump a body amongst all those trees!
ReplyDeleteEEEEEEEK!!!!
ReplyDelete:o)
Ah, there's that patented twist of yours!
ReplyDeleteDear Akemalu - you could not find me.
ReplyDeletehttp://poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.com/2010/08/on-run.html
Cheers and hugs
I think you're right Cheshire Wife ;)
ReplyDeleteDid I scare you Dianne? LOL
I do like a twist in a tale Linda, I can't deny it. ;)
Thanks for coming back with the link Ninotaziz, I'll be right over.
Oh Jake - that was NOT cool! Yikes!
ReplyDeleteNot town cool enough for that.
ReplyDeleteOh! How do you get me every time???
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