Susan at Stony River hosts this fun theme each Monday, so do pop over and read the others who have signed Mr. Linky. The rules are thus:
Every Monday Susan will post a picture for the subject of your story. Microfiction means the shortest of short stories. Think Aesop's fables, comic strips, or even jokes: complete stories that can be told in under a minute. For this game, the limit is a tweetable 140 characters or fewer, including punctuation and spaces.
Here's today's picture and my contribution.
“OK open your eyes” said David.
Molly stared open mouthed
she was not impressed with the property he had bought to ‘do up’ as a holiday home!
That's my idea of heaven!
ReplyDeleteLOL...I have to agree with Molly. If I were David I would head for the hills. LOL. Well done my friend :)
ReplyDeletelol! "Would suit owners with imagination, vision and dosh!" lol!
ReplyDeleteOh I don't know, I'm sure SOMETHING could be done to make it habitable.
ReplyDeletevery well done! holiday home! too funny!
ReplyDeletesmiles, bee
xoxoxoxooxoxox
I bet the view's good though.
ReplyDeleteMolly will be OK as long as David pays for builders to do the work!
Nice tale this week.
Lol, good luck to that project! :-)
ReplyDeleteI think it will be a long, long holiday ;-)
ReplyDeleteNice one.
You like roughing it Laney? ;)
ReplyDeleteDavid's in the doghouse Thom - which is what Molly thinks that building is! LOL
That's a great way to describe it Mrs N!
Probably Valerie but at what cost??? LOL
Cheers Bee x
I think David's idea is to do the work himself Morning AJ :0
They'll need it Evalinn :)
Me too Anthony ;)
Wonderful .. me I cant even leave a short comment or reply ...
ReplyDeleteYep, I think it will indeed be a LONG time before this one is ready to be called a holiday home! Fun one for the day! Enjoy your week!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
ReplyDeleteToooooo funny!
I have a feeling there's going to be A LOT of "doing up" on this property!
Great one, m'dear!
Happy Monday!
X
I take it David is an eternal optimist, but on the up-side, he's probably an incredible romantic, too. Like Molly, I'd not be quite such a happy bunny..
ReplyDeleteVery clever, as ever!
A fixer uppper is an understatement.
ReplyDeleteYep...same agent.
ReplyDeletehahahaha
Yeah, that's going to take a little work!
ReplyDeletethats great!! as soon as i get the chance i am going to try that too.
ReplyDeletewell plotted entry.
ReplyDeleteloved it.
;)
I'll take it even if she won't.
ReplyDeleteAh yes, I'm one of those people who can see "what if"...not good if you're in the real estate market. :O
ReplyDeleteOh boy. I'd kill him! LOL
ReplyDeleteYeah, that's probably a mistake!
ReplyDeleteOn the bright side, that's one holiday home that won't need air conditioning ....
ReplyDeleteLOL!
nice and - er - quiet I would imagine!
ReplyDeleteit would be a fabulous place to spend Halloween ;)
ReplyDeletegreat story lady
and thank you for all your kind comments and for always checking in on me
I think if you believe in miracles and have a very nice bank manager you might just pull it off!!
ReplyDeleteIndi
x
But, it made a great place to hide his body!
ReplyDeleteYou just did Daryl LOL
ReplyDeleteYep it's going to take a long time Sylvia!
Indeedy Ron ;)
David's a dreamer for sure Shrinky!
Isn't it just Mike? LOL
You know him G-man??? ;)
That's an understatement SAW LOL
Good luck Linda :)
Cheers Jingle
You're very brave K LOL
I can see the potential Hope but I don't have the finances ;)
Me too Susan LOL
I think so Trav LOL
That's trueQuilly :)
Oh definitely Flowerpot ;)
My pleasure Dianne xx
Dreams are possible Indi!
Hehe, I never thought of that Mama Zen :)
"Do up"?? How about bulldoze over and start again?!?
ReplyDeleteLOL
ReplyDeletehow i felt moving onto this old boat!
Aloha from Honolulu :)
Comfort Spiral
Akelamalu: David would opened his eyes after a knock out blow from a purse swing. hehehe.
ReplyDeletegreat view from the window though.
hehehe.
loved it honey. xxx
That sounds like a good plan Linda! LOL
ReplyDeleteAh you've been through it Cloudia ;)
Yeah that would have been my reaction too Spiky LOL
I am still chuckling at your later post, This just added to the smiles. I think if I was David I'd go find a place to hide for awhile. Liked Quilly's responses, think of the bugs though.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bill, glad you enjoyed them.
ReplyDeleteLOL. That's too good.
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