The surgeon carefully removed the face, then sewed on the new one.
He'd done it once before, that had given him the idea.
It was risky but would be worth it.
He needed his new girlfriend to look exactly like his wife.
Then no-one would realise his wife was missing and that he'd murdered her.
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That's a bit dark for a Friday morning! X
ReplyDeleteAh, there's that Akelmalu twist that I so love! Good one, girl!
ReplyDeleteOooo. That's a creepy start to my day! We have to assume that the girlfriend is in on it, of course. Otherwisw there'll be more than 55 words when she comes round from the anaesthetic. (:
ReplyDeleteOooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh! Deep and dark!
ReplyDeleteTwisted.
ReplyDeleteSome People Are Soooo two-faced !
ReplyDeleteAnother Stepford Wife!
ReplyDeleteOooooer, that's wicked! I'd hate to be his wife or girl friend. I loved Tony's comment.
ReplyDeletei wonder what the girlfriend will think of this? ha ha ha
ReplyDeletesmiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxo
OMG...that totally got me at the end!!!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant as usual, m'dear! Absolutely brilliant!
Have a great weekend!
X
Oooo, very cool!
ReplyDeleteMmmm yes I suppose it is Dan's Fiver ;)
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it Linda x
The girlfriend thinks she's having a facelift Morning AJ! :0
Just for a change Mrs N ;)
Definitely Scots Lass ;)
Quite Tony LOL
Yep SAW ;)
Twisted yes ;)
I dread to think Bee :0
You're very kind Ron, thanks hon. x
Cheers Mama Zen x
oh deliciously creepy 55! love it!
ReplyDeleteYou know my friend, you could actually complete the perfect murder and/or crime in real life :) LOL This is so well done. Excellent. :) Have a wonderful Friday :)
ReplyDeleteyikes!
ReplyDeleteAloha from Honolulu :)
Comfort Spiral
So glad you liked it Brian :)
ReplyDeleteI don't know whether to take that as a compliment or not Thom! LOL
Yikes indeed Cloudia ;)
Yikes! Does the girlfriend know what he's up to?
ReplyDeleteMy 55 is here.
Lovely touch of black humour in this. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteO dear me that's like something out of those old Tales of the Unexpected!
ReplyDeleteAhh, Hannibal Lechter lives? :0
ReplyDeleteAWESOME creepy 55.
But it isn't the skin that determines shape, it is bone! And what of eye color? And hair color? And height and weight and shape ....
ReplyDeleteAnd what do you mean, he'd done it before? Is this the second girlfriend he's given his wife's face? How creepy!
Won't the girlfriend be missing?
ReplyDeletehahahahahaha
Loved your 55 Ake.
Thanks for playing.
Please have a Kick Ass Week-End!
"The gf thinks she's having a face-lift" Haaaaaaaaaaaa, only you, my friend..! Wonderful, I so love how your twisted mind works (wink).
ReplyDeleteI don't think she does Alice ;)
ReplyDeleteCheers Anthony :)
Yes I suppose it is Gleds ;)
He's not going to eat her Jannie LOL
He's done the operation before Quilly, which is what gave him the idea :)
No they will just tell people she's had a facelift G-man ;)
Me, twisted, Shrinky? Whatever do you mean? ;)
What about the girlfriend? Won't she go missing too?
ReplyDeleteI could never live with a wife lookalike after murdering her :D
Delightfully twisted!
ReplyDeleteHope she didn't end up the same way!
ReplyDeleteHa ha!
Maggie X
Nuts in May
How do I get in your head? woo hoo that one is good. what gets me is why isn't there a movie like that...it would be soo cool.
ReplyDeletegreat job again honey. hehehe.
xxxx
Eek, scary stuff. Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
ReplyDeleteMine’s here.
OMG, Akelamalu - SO creepy and so good!
ReplyDeleteChilling.
ReplyDeleteGrisly!
ReplyDeleteOoooo! Creepy! I love it!
ReplyDeleteHa ha!!! Great! I write mostly flash too. Mostly since after a few paragraphs, my mind begins to wander away!
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