Friday, 23 April 2010

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 115 Rubbish....



Stacey was clearing the loft.


A bird cage, the nest of tables, a light fitting,


battered old suitcase, old shoes, clothes, a tea set.




Mick would be so pleased she'd thrown everything out.


Elsewhere........


"I've got the stash tucked away in the loft in a battered old suitcase" Mick told the rest of the gang....



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28 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 April 2010 at 08:51

    OMG how fun and so perfect for a continuation. Wont Stacey be surprised and Mick will for that matter as well. I can't wait for next week to see if.... Have a great Friday :)

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  2. tony23 April 2010 at 12:51

    Alway Keep A Stash Just incase!

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  3. Jinksy23 April 2010 at 13:15

    Maybe time for a quick edit, to add the T onto 'old' ?! Clever 55...

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  4. Empress Bee (of the high sea)23 April 2010 at 14:03

    getting interesting!

    smiles, bee
    xoxoxoxoxoxo

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  5. Misty DawnS23 April 2010 at 14:24

    I just love it when you put a spin on these posts! Great one!

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  6. Ron23 April 2010 at 16:06

    OMG Akelamalu, this one had me totally wondering as I scrolled through each sentence.

    LOVED the ending!

    ?????????

    Thanks for sharing yet, another great Flash 55, m'dear!

    Have a great weekend!
    X

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  7. Valerie23 April 2010 at 16:30

    Really good. An unexpected ending. All I could think of at the end was Whoooops!

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  8. Daryl23 April 2010 at 16:56

    Applause ... love how clever you are with words and how nice of Blogger to let me comment ..

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  9. Flowerpot23 April 2010 at 17:07

    very good Ak!

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  10. San23 April 2010 at 19:20

    I love the way you work a clever plot twist into so few words. Bravo!

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  11. Brian Miller23 April 2010 at 19:39

    haha. nice 55. the dangers of low motivation...

    mine is up!

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  12. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall23 April 2010 at 21:32

    bright 55,
    have a fun Friday!

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  13. anthonynorth23 April 2010 at 22:05

    Ah, the best laid plans :-)
    Nice one.

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  14. hope23 April 2010 at 23:30

    When will the men folk realize there's not a safe place in a house that we won't at least THINK about cleaning? :)

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  15. Travis Cody24 April 2010 at 02:25

    Yikes! Somebody is not going to be happy!

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  16. G-Man24 April 2010 at 03:40

    I cleaned my office today, and carried out three huge garbage bags full og stuff.
    I know there is a treasure in there someplace!
    Excellent 55 Ake...
    I loved it!
    Thank you for visiting, thank you for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  17. Shrinky24 April 2010 at 11:42

    Teehee, be sure your crimes will catch you out, eh? Lovely!

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  18. buffalodick24 April 2010 at 12:43

    When my MIL died, they found uncashed checks hidden all over the house!

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  19. Unknown24 April 2010 at 13:59

    OMG.Isn't that the WORST thing!
    Very powerful and funny 55!
    Mine is here
    hugs
    shakira

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  20. Dianne24 April 2010 at 16:45

    this would make a great start to a wonderful mystery movie!

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  21. Spiky Zora Jones24 April 2010 at 21:02

    akelamalu: hahaha...See that's why pirates buried their loot. ;)

    have a fab weekend sweetie. xxx

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  22. Julia Phillips Smith24 April 2010 at 21:57

    Score a point for hoarders everywhere!

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  23. secret agent woman25 April 2010 at 01:05

    Sounds like Mick is in trouble.

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  24. Cloudia25 April 2010 at 05:09

    I JUST told my niece to go through EVERYTHING carefully before she disposes of my possessions...


    Many years from now, you understand (God willing)


    Aloha from Waikiki


    Comfort Spiral

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  25. Anonymous25 April 2010 at 09:16

    Great 55... and unexpected :0)

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  26. Akelamalu26 April 2010 at 15:31

    I have a feeling Mick and Stacey are heading for the divorce courts Thom ;)

    Well Mick tried but was thwarted by Stacey Tony

    Well spotted Jinksy and thanks.

    It will be when Mick gets home Bee! LOL

    Glad you enjoyed it Misty x


    I'm pleased it had you wondering Ron, that's the aim. x


    Cheers Val, I think Mick will be saying more than Whoops though don't you? LOL


    I'm always pleased when blogger lets you comment Daryl and thanks for keep trying. x

    Thanks Flowerpot x

    I try San, glad you like it.

    LOL quite Brian :0

    Cheers Jingle :)

    Yes, there's always someone or something to thwart them Anthony :)

    Haha you're so right Hope!

    There'll be tears no doubt Trav!

    You're actually been clearing out G-man? I don't believe it! ;)

    Definitely Shrinky :)

    Really Buff? What a find!

    It was the worst thing for Mick Shakira! LOL

    You think so Dianne? Thankyou.

    Mick would have been better off burying it wouldn't he Spiky? ;)

    I don't think Mick would agree Julia LOL

    Mick and Stacey both SAW ;)

    Good idea Cloudia!

    Thanks Eternally Distracted x

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  27. Maggie May27 April 2010 at 12:27

    Oh dear.... thats it then.... gone!

    Nuts in May

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  28. happily retired gal3 May 2010 at 16:26

    I've finally opened my reader for the first time in AGES and have enjoyed catching up here this morning. Thanks for making your entire post available in your feeds. You never cease to come up with something wonderful with these Flash Fictions. I do LOVE your soapstone elephant and have a friend who would covet it for HER collection! Hope all's well with you and yours.
    Hugs and blessings,

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