Friday, 12 March 2010

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 110 A Delicate Operation....


This was a delicate operation.


One she had carried out before.


She was nervous, but confident in her ability.


She double checked that everything was prepared.


All the equipment needed was assembled.


"Here we go".


She prepared the skin, holding it taut with one hand,


she swiftly ripped the waxing strip off her husband's back.







Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
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41 comments:

  1. anthonynorth12 March 2010 at 08:57

    Aghh! The horror!!!!

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  2. Brian Miller12 March 2010 at 10:59

    did you hear me just scream? yikes...frightening 55...lol.

    my 55 is up!

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  3. Peter Stone12 March 2010 at 13:24

    Gotta to say, that sounds extremely painful...

    My 55 is School Lunch

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  4. Empress Bee (of the high sea)12 March 2010 at 13:31

    ewwww! ha ha ha too funny!

    smiles, bee
    xoxoxoxoxoxoxo

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  5. clean and crazy12 March 2010 at 14:08

    excellent!! ha,ha,ha i am still laughing!!

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  6. Valerie12 March 2010 at 14:15

    Great laugh here. You're a whiz at this 55 lark.

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  7. Akelamalu12 March 2010 at 14:41

    Dumdad, Anthony, Brian, Peter - don't be wimps! (wink)

    Bee, Clean&Crazy, Valerie I knew female readers would find this funny!

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  8. Alice Audrey12 March 2010 at 16:13

    Ouch! You got me with the last line. Personally, I like to run my fingers through his fur.

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  9. Mona12 March 2010 at 16:30

    LOL! Delicate operation indeed :D

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  10. secret agent woman12 March 2010 at 16:43

    Ouch! And ewww!

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  11. G-Man12 March 2010 at 16:45

    Waxing eh?
    I have a good ole strait razor!
    Thank you Ake for evoking a wince from me.
    Excellent 55 My Dear...
    You Rock The Empire!!
    Thanks for playing today, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  12. Buzzard12 March 2010 at 16:45

    I guess this nothing like a waxing moon?

    My 55: A Familiar Face

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  13. Ron12 March 2010 at 18:10

    Oh, you get me EVERY TIME!!!!

    HAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

    This ties in perfectly with my other waxing fear.

    *wink*

    tee, hee!

    Thanks for sharing your brilliance, m'dear!

    Enjoy your weekend!
    X

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  14. buffalodick12 March 2010 at 18:49

    Right now, there is a radio station here that is running a contest for the hairiest man..He will win a permanent hair removal treatment!

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  15. Akelamalu12 March 2010 at 18:56

    I don't mind a hairy chest or legs Alice but a hairy back turns me off big time!

    I think she enjoyed it Mona! ;)

    I don't find waxing painful at all SAW but I'm sure men do. ;)

    You shave your back G-man?:0

    Not unless she did the full back,sac and crack Buzzard! ;)

    I know your waxing fear Ron! ;)

    Have you entered the competition Buff? :0

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  16. cheshire wife12 March 2010 at 19:13

    You didn't mention the general anaesthetic!

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  17. Julia Phillips Smith12 March 2010 at 20:09

    LOL - fooled me again!

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  18. quilly12 March 2010 at 20:41

    Ow! Ow! Ow! i just finished plucking my chin. (Yes, you read that correctly.)

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  19. Anonymous12 March 2010 at 23:53

    LOL. OUCH!! You are sooo good at these. I wonder if Nair would have worked on this LOL Have a great weekend :)

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  20. Cloudia13 March 2010 at 03:01

    AAAAiiiieeee!


    Aloha from Hawaii my funny Friend!


    Comfort Spiral

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  21. Travis Cody13 March 2010 at 03:30

    NO THANK YOU!!!

    Sorry to shout...but yikes!

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  22. sewa mobil13 March 2010 at 04:30

    wow great post and great advice. I tend to only read the blogs that I find interesting .
    Keep posting stuff like this i really like it.

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  23. Akelamalu13 March 2010 at 10:23

    Something most men would need methinks Cheshire Wife! LOL

    Haha, glad the twist worked Julia :)

    Waxing would have been quicker Quilly :)

    Quite possibly Thom are you going to try it? LOL

    Aeiiiii indeed Cloudia!

    LOL Don't fancy it eh Trav?

    Glad you enjoyed it sewel mobil

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  24. Shrinky13 March 2010 at 11:45

    Haha, she must really love that guy of hers..

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  25. Dianne13 March 2010 at 12:55

    Ha!
    priceless
    as always the end is never what is expected

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  26. hope13 March 2010 at 13:54

    Yikes! Hope she had on her running shoes. :)

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  27. Linda13 March 2010 at 16:59

    Ah, one of those "this is going to hurt you a lot more than it hurts me" sort of operations! Grimace!!

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  28. Flowerpot13 March 2010 at 18:15

    another goodie Ak!

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  29. Leah13 March 2010 at 21:26

    That was hilarious. Do you write these yourself?

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  30. Lisa14 March 2010 at 00:38

    Great post :-)

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  31. Jingle14 March 2010 at 02:00

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/14/have-your-poetential-awaken-in-your-waking-hours/

    Sunday 160 is up,
    I am curious how many of your Friday 55 will take the challenge.
    Happy Sunday!

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  32. lettuce14 March 2010 at 09:19

    :-)

    so nicely done

    ouch, too

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  33. Akelamalu14 March 2010 at 12:03

    Oh yes she does Shrinky ;)

    I'm pleased the ending is still a surprise Dianne :)

    She doesn't need running shoes Hope he's in too much pain to chase her! LOL

    You got it Linda! ;)

    Cheers Flowerpot :)

    I do indeed Joy. Welcome to my home from home, it's nice to meet you. :)

    Thanks Lisa :)

    Happy Sunday to you too Jingle :)

    Thanks Lettuce

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  34. Jingle14 March 2010 at 17:21

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/12/55-when-i-turn-on-my-pc/

    here is my first Flash Friday 55 this week,
    thank you for looking at it!

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  35. Susan at Stony River14 March 2010 at 17:55

    EEwww!! I never saw that coming! LOL

    I've been having a devil of a time commenting on your blog - this is the first time the popup box would work, since Friday. Well better late than never? LOL

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  36. Maggie May14 March 2010 at 19:30

    I bet it hurt. Thought she was a surgeon at first!

    Nuts in May

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  37. Evalinn15 March 2010 at 07:38

    She´s a brave woman! ;-)

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  38. Akelamalu15 March 2010 at 16:30

    I'll take a look later Jingle

    I'm sorry you've had problems commenting here Susan, I have no idea why that would be.

    Aha that's exactly what I wanted you to think Maggie - we're on the same wavelength!

    She is Evalinn LOL

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  39. Spiky Zora Jones16 March 2010 at 18:02

    akelamalu: I was wondering what you were oing to twist it into...and as usual, I laughed. hehehe

    thanks sweets I love these.
    xxx

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  40. Akelamalu16 March 2010 at 19:48

    So glad you enjoyed it Spiky x

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  41. Anonymous20 March 2010 at 22:13

    YIKES! Methinks that must hurt!
    Nice turning of the tables ;-)
    Hugs and blessings,

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