Friday, 13 February 2009

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 63 Be My Valentine

Be My Valentine


Valentine will you be mine

In your entirety?

My heart is yours,

As is my soul,

Why must you be so petty?

Take off that frown and raise a smile,

It makes your face look crinkly.

We’ll do your favourite and share a bath,

That will make you smiley


and make your willy very wrinkly.
I was feeling naughty!


Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

I won't be doing a 55 next week as I'll be in Spain.
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41 comments:

  1. Flowerpot13 February 2009 at 10:23

    great one Ak and happy Valentine's to you - have agreat time in Spain.

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  2. buffalodick13 February 2009 at 13:41

    Well, you know how to get those wrinkles out by now, I'm betting! You are ready for vacation, I see..

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  3. Connie T.13 February 2009 at 14:18

    This is cute. Have a great Valentine day and good time on your vacation.

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  4. Linda13 February 2009 at 14:52

    I guess so you were being naughty! My wish for you this weekend is no wrinkled Valentines!

    Maybe after you get back you can do a Friday 55 about your trip to Spain!

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  5. Empress Bee (of the high sea)13 February 2009 at 16:34

    have fun in spain honey!

    smiles, bee
    xoxoxoxxoxoxoox

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  6. Pam13 February 2009 at 16:40

    you dirty minx! lol could it be cos your going on vacation :) happy valentine's day and enjoy your time in spain. xoxo

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  7. Ron13 February 2009 at 16:45

    LOVED THIS!

    But of course, I'm naughty too!

    Tee, hee.

    Happy Valentines Day, Akelamalu!

    And have a wonderful time in Spain.

    You'll be missed!

    X

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  8. Anonymous13 February 2009 at 19:21

    Willy very wrinkly. LOL.

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  9. Mojo13 February 2009 at 19:30

    Scandalous! LOL...

    I thought you were going to abandon your penchant for the final twist this week, but no! You just reversed the order of it.

    Delightful!

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  10. Cha Cha13 February 2009 at 19:33

    Me likey the naughty!

    This was great!

    And that little smiley heart at the end is simply too cute.

    Have a blast in Spain, mi amor, Hula Babe.

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  11. Reverend Michael Kilgore13 February 2009 at 19:51

    In Spain? We'll miss ya! Great 55-thanks for stopping by...

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  12. Lu'13 February 2009 at 20:13

    I didn't have to take a bath with you, just read your great story to smile :)

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  13. Head Cookie13 February 2009 at 20:21

    LOL naughty is nice and this is a great and cute 55

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  14. G-Man13 February 2009 at 20:36

    Ake...?
    Such a Skamp!!!
    Naughty AND Nice 55...
    You must be in your 'Holiday Mode'!
    Have a safe trip....G

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  15. Spiky Zora Jones13 February 2009 at 21:03

    I love it when you are naughty.

    Now, come here so I can give you a spanking...as a reward. :D

    Have a Happy Valentine's Day.

    Ciao honey.

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  16. maryt/theteach13 February 2009 at 21:05

    I love the poem, Akalamau! I don't care if you're naughty! Happy Valentine's Day! :)

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  17. Akelamalu13 February 2009 at 21:41

    Happy Valentine's Day to you too Flowerpot x

    Whatever do you mean Buff ;)

    Thanks Connie Happy Valentine's Day to you too. :)

    I'll try to do a Spanish 55 when I get back Linda :)

    I'll try Bee and you have a great cruise. :)

    It's the thought of the sun beating down on my back that turns my thoughts Ciara (wink)

    Aw thanks Ron, same to you honey. x

    Glad you had a laugh connieemeraldyes :)

    I'm so pleased you enjoyed it Mojo :)

    Ah just a little bit of fun Strumpet, I'm happy you enjoyed it. x

    Yep Spain on Monday Mike I can hardly wait!

    Aw you're kind Lu m'deario. x

    Thanks Jadey :)

    Oh yes I'm definitely in holiday mood G-man ;)


    Oh Miss Jones you made me blush! :0


    Aw thanks Teach Happy Valentine's Day to you too. x

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  18. Dr.John13 February 2009 at 22:25

    Interesting poem. Enjoy Spain. we will mis your 55.

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  19. Donnetta14 February 2009 at 00:24

    I'm blushing! Happy V Day! Have fun in Spain and share when you get back. D

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  20. Finding Pam14 February 2009 at 02:14

    It's great to be full of so much naughty sometimes! Happy Valentine's day and have a lovely trip to Spain.

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  21. Finding Pam14 February 2009 at 02:14

    It's great to be full of so much naughty sometimes! Happy Valentine's day and have a lovely trip to Spain.

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  22. Cloudia14 February 2009 at 04:20

    Another little gem, my friend! aloha Poet ;-)
    And a very happy Valentine's Day to you BOTH-

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  23. Thom - - Dr. John14 February 2009 at 04:26

    Naughty and hilarious.

    Also, a belated Happy Blog-a-birthday to you.

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  24. Mona14 February 2009 at 04:30

    O dear....that bath must be really COLD!!

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  25. Shadow14 February 2009 at 09:45

    naughty but nice. happy valentine's to you!!!

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  26. Akelamalu14 February 2009 at 10:29

    Thanks Dr. John :)

    Oh sorry I mde you blushDonnetta x

    Yes it is good to be naughty sometimes Pam ;)

    Happy Valentine's Day to you too Cloudia and thankyou. x

    Glad you enjoyed it Jeff and thanks for the blogversary greetings. x

    Nah we just stayed in too long Mona (wink)

    Thanks Shadow and the same to you. :)

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  27. Lulda Casadaga14 February 2009 at 16:02

    Naughty and nice and now for the spice in Spain! Happy hearts to you and enjoy your trip...

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  28. Akelamalu14 February 2009 at 17:38

    Thankyou Lulda x

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  29. Travis Cody14 February 2009 at 18:12

    HA! Very clever! That made me laugh.

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  30. TopChamp14 February 2009 at 18:29

    bad girlx

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  31. Julia Phillips Smith15 February 2009 at 01:50

    Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha...!

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  32. storyteller15 February 2009 at 03:20

    Hahahhaha ... thanks for the chuckles! Hope your Valentine's Day was lovely.
    Hugs and blessings,

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  33. MarmiteToasty15 February 2009 at 09:43

    LMFAO, say NO to wrinkled willies lol....

    Finally about to reconnect here AGAIN..... gawds sake...

    Have the most super of holidays....

    and if you find any wrinkly you know whats, well, take photos LMFAO

    x

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  34. Marshall Family15 February 2009 at 14:21

    ahahaha!!! oo love it!!!! Naughet ake!!

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  35. Akelamalu15 February 2009 at 21:23

    Ah I'm so pleased it made you laugh Trav that was the intention :)

    That's me Topchamp! ;)

    I take it you enjoyed it Julia :)

    I hope your Valentine's Day was good too Storyteller x

    If I see any wrinkly you know whats I'll definitely take a photo Marmie!

    Glad you liked it Emmie x

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  36. cheshire wife15 February 2009 at 21:50

    Time for a holiday, I think. Hope you have a good one!

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  37. Evalinn16 February 2009 at 09:05

    Funny! lol :-D

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  38. Barb16 February 2009 at 16:28

    Nothing wrong with being naughty. :) Come see my Let's Be Honest post.. hahaha.

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  39. Real Live Lesbian17 February 2009 at 14:09

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  40. Real Live Lesbian17 February 2009 at 14:09

    Hahahaha! I bet you can fix that though! ;)

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  41. Jo Beaufoix25 February 2009 at 00:16

    Hee hee. Love it. Sorry I've been MIA lovely Akela. It's been so good to read today. Hugs. And happy blogiversary too. xoxoxoxox

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