Friday, 13 June 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 31 On the pull

On the pull


Can I buy you a drink? asked the beautiful blonde.


“Why not?” he answered “ Do you come here often?”




“Only when I want to pick up strangers” she replied resting her hand on his thigh.


“Well that was fun, honey” he said

“I suppose we’d better get back now and take the baby sitter home!”




Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The object of the game is to write a story using exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

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26 comments:

  1. Pam13 June 2008 at 08:13

    ha ha good one, ake! :) mine is up, too.

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  2. Flowerpot13 June 2008 at 09:17

    great one Ak - as ever!

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  3. Laura Jane Williams13 June 2008 at 09:54

    Awwww, I like that one! Romance in the old dogs yet, then!

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  4. Dumdad13 June 2008 at 12:17

    So that's what you do in a bar...

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  5. buffalodick13 June 2008 at 12:24

    There are two kinds of fantasies: unrealisic and plausable- that was plausable!

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  6. Odat13 June 2008 at 13:26

    Ha!
    Another good one as usual.

    Peace

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  7. Anonymous13 June 2008 at 15:22

    Haha, that was cute. Have a great weekend!

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  8. x13 June 2008 at 15:26

    hahaha. good 1! have a fab weekend, akelamalu!

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  9. Dianne13 June 2008 at 15:59

    keeping the marriage alive eh?

    cool!!

    good one.

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  10. Akelamalu13 June 2008 at 16:58

    Thanks ciara x

    Cheers Flowerpot x

    Yes romance is alive and kicking GIM ;)

    Oooh not me Dumdad ;)

    Definitely Buff!

    Aw thanks Odat x

    You too Josh and thanks. :)

    Thanks Acey You have a fab weekend too. x

    Well it's one option Dianne :)

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  11. James Goodman13 June 2008 at 17:09

    lol, that was a great 55, AK. Thanks for the smile. :D

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  12. Empress Bee (of the high sea)13 June 2008 at 17:50

    you do wonders in 55 words!

    smiles, bee
    xxoxoxoxoxoxo

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  13. Donnetta13 June 2008 at 19:20

    Cute 55er! Spark is still there. Mom and Dad carrying on-blush.
    Donnetta

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  14. Maggie May13 June 2008 at 19:32

    Very good!

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  15. Linda13 June 2008 at 21:39

    Who says old married folks can't have a little romance in their lives?!?

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  16. Sandi McBride13 June 2008 at 22:24

    Loved it LOVED IT! Put me in mind of Do you like Pina Coladas, lol
    lovely
    Sandi

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  17. Anonymous14 June 2008 at 00:05

    Very safe pick-up, I'd say.

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  18. smarmoofus14 June 2008 at 00:44

    *giggle* Keeping the magic going... how fun. *smile* I love this. It speaks of an enduring relationship. Such a strong bond. And yet, they remember to flirt with one another and remind each other that they're attracted. *hides her depressing 55* I like yours better.

    -smarmoofus

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  19. Ron14 June 2008 at 02:37

    You ALWAYS get me on the "punch line" with these!!!

    Clever and smart you are!

    (oooh...and it looks like their having a nice glass of RED wine...my FAV!)

    Thanks for another great Friday 55, my friend!

    Enjoy your weekend!

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  20. G-Man14 June 2008 at 02:40

    Oooooh Ake, a saucy tale today!!
    Very nicely done. Thanks for playing, and I'll see you soon...G

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  21. Mike Golch14 June 2008 at 03:12

    I like the 55 thing,I'd do it but I donot feel that I would be that creative as you.That's my story and I'm sticking to it.

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  22. Akelamalu14 June 2008 at 11:03

    YOu're welcome James I'm pleased you liked it. :)

    Aw thanks Bee x

    Yes Mom's and Dads do carry on Donnetta ;)

    Cheers Maggie :)

    Quite Linda!

    Glad you liked it Sandi

    Oh yes Citizen very safe! LOL

    Flirting can be so much fun Smarmoofus ;)

    Red wine - yes Ron what else??? xx

    I just fancied a bit of sauce today g-man ((wink))

    You could surprise yourself Mike - go on have a go! :)

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  23. la bellina mammina15 June 2008 at 10:01

    I LOVE THIS!

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  24. Akelamalu15 June 2008 at 10:57

    Thanks Bella. x

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  25. Travis Cody15 June 2008 at 21:50

    Sometimes a little play is just the thing to spice up a relationship!

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  26. Akelamalu16 June 2008 at 17:12

    ((wink)) I know Travis :)

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