Friday, 23 May 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 28 Relax

Relax



Surrounded by candles, the bath water fragrant and frothy.

Champagne on ice, glass ready, just what she needed after the day she’d had.







He’d gone to so much trouble preparing it, how thoughtful of him.



It could only get better.



“Are you relaxed honey?” he smiled





Just before he threw the hairdryer into the water!




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38 comments:

  1. Jennifer S23 May 2008 at 06:48

    Ha! Brilliant. I'll be suspicious if my husband ever draws a bath for me now.

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  2. Pam23 May 2008 at 06:51

    omgoodness, ake! you've been getting on the dark side lately lol :) i love it! another fabulous 55 :)

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  3. Pam23 May 2008 at 07:45

    p.s. mine will be up in 15 mins lol

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  4. Flowerpot23 May 2008 at 09:31

    Excellent Ak - another winner!

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  5. x23 May 2008 at 09:32

    hahaha. ciara's comment is cute. made me laugh.

    this 1's entertaining, akelamalu. =D

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  6. James Goodman23 May 2008 at 12:05

    lol, now that's a great twist. :D Excellent tt, AK.

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  7. buffalodick23 May 2008 at 12:23

    You're sort of intrigued by murder, aren't you?

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  8. G-Man23 May 2008 at 12:37

    Ake...
    Now lets hope that there was a circuit breaker in that house!!!
    Great job sweetie!!
    Thanks for playing!!!
    And maybe you just just "shower" for a while((wink))..
    I just LOVE Pearls..xox

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  9. Marianne23 May 2008 at 13:36

    Ooh, didn't see it coming!
    Also, I've nearly read the entire memoir about your grandmother's life - it's great - I couldn't resist as my grandmother was also called Kit. x M

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  10. Cath23 May 2008 at 14:24

    As always - a great twist in your tales! And it just feels so appropriate to me after the day I had yesterday!
    I'm less frazzled today... ;0)

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  11. Empress Bee (of the high sea)23 May 2008 at 14:28

    oh no! good one again!


    smiles, bee
    xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

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  12. RiverPoet23 May 2008 at 14:33

    EEK! I didn't expect that ending!

    Peace - D

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  13. Dumdad23 May 2008 at 15:58

    Hannibal Lector be afeared - Akela is on the prowl!

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  14. Linda23 May 2008 at 16:03

    Hmm, I'm beginning to see a pattern here to some of your Flash Fictions!

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  15. Dianne23 May 2008 at 16:59

    Cool! Love the dark side!

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  16. storyteller23 May 2008 at 18:38

    Well done! I’m finally learning to anticipate a twist in these Friday Fictions. You’ve got a devious imagination my dear ;--)
    Hugs and blessings,

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  17. Jo Beaufoix23 May 2008 at 20:04

    Blimey I didn't expect that Akela, hee hee. Brilliant.

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  18. the mother of this lot23 May 2008 at 22:11

    That actually made me jump!

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  19. the mother of this lot23 May 2008 at 22:12

    That actually made me jump!

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  20. Travis Cody24 May 2008 at 02:39

    GAH! Now that caught me by surprise.

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  21. Julia Phillips Smith24 May 2008 at 03:00

    Mwahaha... sinister in just the right way.

    And tag! You're it!

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  22. Sandi McBride24 May 2008 at 03:44

    Now that gave me cold chills, lol...then a hot flash...hmm, good read!
    Sandi

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  23. Donnetta24 May 2008 at 04:29

    Hi, "A". I didn't see that one coming at all! What a guy. So accommodating. Gotta love him. Donnetta

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  24. Ron24 May 2008 at 06:14

    OH MY GOD, Akelamalu...between last Friday's 55 and this one...I would SWEAR your planning something wonderful!!

    Damn...what an electrifying way to go!

    tee, hee!

    Thoroughly enjoyed it, dear lady!

    Have a great weekend!

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  25. Akelamalu24 May 2008 at 10:09

    LOL me too Jennifer!

    Mmm yes, I have rather haven't I Ciara

    Thanks Flowerpot :)

    Cheers Acey x

    Why thankyou James :)

    Now you've mentioned it I guess I am Buff

    Good idea g-man ((wink))

    I'm so pleased you're enjoying reading KIT Marianne, thankyou. xx

    Good to hear you're calmer now Cath x

    Thankyou Bee x

    Ah it worked then Momma! :)

    LOL you make me laugh Dumdad :)

    I'll have to change the pattern now then Linda ((wink))

    Cheers Dianne

    I've never been called devious before Storyteller ((wink))

    Glad you enjoyed it Jo x

    Really MOTL? Cool!

    Oh great Trav, that was the intention.


    I'll check out the tag Julia, and thanks.

    Thankyou Sandi :)

    Not the sort you'd want to live with though eh Donnetta? ;)

    I think I'd better do a lighter one for next week Ron :)

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  26. Mona24 May 2008 at 11:43

    OMG! That is just terrible!

    I mean the plan!

    The 55 is great!

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  27. Laura Jane Williams24 May 2008 at 17:46

    Your 55's have taken a sinister turn of late, missus! Something you are not telling us...?!

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  28. CG24 May 2008 at 18:36

    You are evil!! Didn't see THAT coming!!

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  29. maryt/theteach24 May 2008 at 21:49

    Ak, you are funny and EVIL! HA!

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  30. Akelamalu25 May 2008 at 10:39

    Thankyou Mona :)

    Mmmm they have haven't they GIM? I've no idea why :0

    Moi evil CG? ;)

    Funny and Evil me Teach? I suppose that was a bit evil!

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  31. Unknown25 May 2008 at 17:47

    I was not prepared for the last line. However, I should have been.

    [:-)

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  32. KB26 May 2008 at 11:01

    The last line was so unexpected. I love it.

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  33. Odat26 May 2008 at 11:40

    Yes,,,evil!!! hehe.
    Great 55!
    Peace

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  34. Akelamalu27 May 2008 at 11:00

    You didn't guess Nick?

    Thanks KB, I enjoyed yours too. :)

    I know it is evil Odat ;)

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  35. Anonymous27 May 2008 at 12:57

    Yikes! This one took a gruesome turn!!

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  37. Misty DawnS27 May 2008 at 14:08

    And, suddenly the rest of her day didn't matter anymore.

    Whoa! I kinda like it when you get that little 'evil-twitch' to ya ;-) Course, then again, I AM a fan of Mysteries and Horror. hehe

    LOVE it Ake!

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  38. Akelamalu28 May 2008 at 14:58

    It did rather didn't it Citizen? :(

    I like mysteries and horror too Misty :)

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