tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post1677638754402663585..comments2024-02-26T07:14:39.823+00:00Comments on Everything And Nothing: Portrait Of Words #9 .......Akelamaluhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-13775574852739046172009-05-20T15:31:54.093+01:002009-05-20T15:31:54.093+01:00LOL you know me too well Linda - I'll have to writ...LOL you know me too well <B>Linda</B> - I'll have to write something without a twist now! :)Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-5166475248370279172009-05-20T01:51:54.417+01:002009-05-20T01:51:54.417+01:00I knew it - I knew there would be a twist!!
I j...I knew it - I knew there would be a twist!! <br /><br />I just love your stories - love 'em!!Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05698969349369789642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-43074984142047251402009-05-19T16:54:00.000+01:002009-05-19T16:54:00.000+01:00I've never been there Dianne so I did a search on ...I've never been there <B>Dianne</B> so I did a search on google maps to find where the Golden Gate Bridge lead to. Of course I knew it lead to San Francisco but nothing more than that. I hope I didn't mess up with the place names etc. :)<br /><br /><br />I'm pleased you enjoyed the ending <B>Ron</B> and it's great that it kept your interest to the end. xx<br /><br />There seems to be quite a few of us got the same inspiration from the photos this time <B>Maggie</B> :) I've put the link right at Jeff's now. <br /><br />Zoiks <B>Julia</B>? <br /><br />Yes he is lucky <B>Cheshire Wife</B> :)<br /><br />So glad you liked it <B>Jo</B> x<br /><br />Yes it is a happy ending <B>Dr. John</B> as long as Adrian makes up for lost time. :)<br /><br />Aw thanks <B>Sandi</B> xx<br /><br />Me too <B>Bettygram</B> :)<br /><br />Thanks <B>Bee</B> :)<br /><br />He did miss out on a lot <B>Spiky</B> but hopefully he'll make up for it. I'm so pleased you liked it. xx<br /><br /><br />Oh you're too kind <B>G-man</B>, thanks honey. xx<br /><br />Ceers <B>Trav</B>, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. :)<br /><br />I put the link right <B>Jeff</B>, I think it's OK now. Thanks for your kind words about my story, I'm flattered. :)<br /><br />Aw thanks <B>Thumbelina</B> how kind you are. xx<br /><br />Yes Adrian could have tried to contact Frannie over the years so I'd be inclined not to believe him <B>Quilly</B>. Yes I had noticed the echo - I think the image of 'summer of love' struck quite a few people. I'm glad you found me despite the link not working. :)<br /><br />I'm glad she didn't wait around too <B>BJRoan</B> - he may never have come back! Glad you liked it.<br /><br />I think his uncle may have had an idea <B>Pam</B> - how evil was he?:0Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-82291484672058538612009-05-19T14:53:00.000+01:002009-05-19T14:53:00.000+01:00Did his Uncle know that Frannie was with child? I...Did his Uncle know that Frannie was with child? Is that why he had to leave town so fast or is there another reason?<br /><br />Once again, I love reading your stories. Just wonderful twist at the end. Frannie did the right thing to tell him about his family. Maybe they will have a friendship in time.<br /><br />I am up and posted my dear.Finding Pamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07671978828279304904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-70502659191161011942009-05-19T12:51:00.000+01:002009-05-19T12:51:00.000+01:00I'm glad she didn't wait around for him. Loved th...I'm glad she didn't wait around for him. Loved the ending!Roanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01841824351740989301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-86359275498293417182009-05-19T09:38:00.000+01:002009-05-19T09:38:00.000+01:00Jeff is correct, your link at PoW doesn't work, bu...Jeff is correct, your link at PoW doesn't work, but I knew how to find you!<br /><br />Poor Adrian - -of course, I'd feel sorrier for him if he'd tried to contact her but somehow couldn't. The "I still love you" sounds a bit hollow after all those years of silence -- even so, he may redeem himself in the eyes of his grandchild, and in so doing win over his daughter and Frannie as well. You've woven a tail with a tragic, yet hopeful ending.<br /><br />Also, I am hearing an interesting echo though out the different stories. Do you hear it, too?quillyhttp://quilldancer.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-81170060773071191522009-05-19T09:20:00.000+01:002009-05-19T09:20:00.000+01:00Very well done Aelamalu. I wasn't expecting that a...Very well done Aelamalu. I wasn't expecting that at the end. A love story in the true sense of the word! Great story.Thumbelinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16797968670320215838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-44439595965079649112009-05-19T06:19:00.000+01:002009-05-19T06:19:00.000+01:00Wait for it. . . wait for it. . . BAM!!!
Love yo...Wait for it. . . wait for it. . . BAM!!! <br /><br />Love your endings. The whole story is great, don't get me wrong, but the way you can spring a twist in is masterful.<br /><br />don't know why the link you left doesn't work. Looks like everything is typed correctly, but for some reason it doesn't load your page.Thom - - Dr. Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10934715484719554704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-20789679376046940452009-05-19T03:02:00.000+01:002009-05-19T03:02:00.000+01:00Well, a bit of a bittersweet ending there. Very e...Well, a bit of a bittersweet ending there. Very enjoyable.Travis Codyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06192526507760146748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-45576784613175138722009-05-19T02:24:00.000+01:002009-05-19T02:24:00.000+01:00Of course we like it!
It's typical Ake Brilliance!...Of course we like it!<br />It's typical Ake Brilliance!!!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-5351506832333052502009-05-19T02:15:00.000+01:002009-05-19T02:15:00.000+01:00A daughter and grandson!!!!!
OMG...he ssure misse...A daughter and grandson!!!!!<br /><br />OMG...he ssure missed out on so very much.<br /><br />I love your story...wonderful wonderful.<br /><br />I love how you write. You hold me through it so easily and I always want more.<br /><br />So I have to ask. More please. :D<br /><br />ciao honey...this is a fab post. I really enjoyed it.Spiky Zora Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09283587481327552086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-895741235346270352009-05-19T00:56:00.000+01:002009-05-19T00:56:00.000+01:00she is a great character and that makes the story ...she is a great character and that makes the story i think...<br /><br /><br />smiles, bee<br />xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoEmpress Bee (of the high sea)https://www.blogger.com/profile/08300140506585000934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-69214085675992478672009-05-19T00:47:00.000+01:002009-05-19T00:47:00.000+01:00Good story. Life goes on. I hope his child and gr...Good story. Life goes on. I hope his child and grandchild can develope a relationship.bettygramhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07039975744716330002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-87495327483620886032009-05-19T00:09:00.000+01:002009-05-19T00:09:00.000+01:00Wow...well done! I just loved this!
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SandiWow...well done! I just loved this!<br />hugs<br />SandiSandi McBridehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09033518416111957858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-6176373137972945952009-05-18T23:42:00.000+01:002009-05-18T23:42:00.000+01:00Great story with at least one romance that worked ...Great story with at least one romance that worked out. It was good he got to discover a daughter and a grandson. I guess this is a happy ending.Dr.Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02752941912945095736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-4076495135396208852009-05-18T23:20:00.000+01:002009-05-18T23:20:00.000+01:00I love that. I love that she moved on but also re...I love that. I love that she moved on but also respected him enough to tell him about his daughter. Brilliant.Jo Beaufoixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00957369658590225971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-7693547281078318452009-05-18T21:25:00.000+01:002009-05-18T21:25:00.000+01:00What a lucky guy!
Thank you for your recent comme...What a lucky guy!<br /><br />Thank you for your recent comments on my blog.cheshire wifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13944869219641386387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-28016861618131894822009-05-18T21:17:00.000+01:002009-05-18T21:17:00.000+01:00Zoiks!Zoiks!Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-90862741908005783082009-05-18T21:14:00.000+01:002009-05-18T21:14:00.000+01:00We were travelling down the same route this time, ...We were travelling down the same route this time, Akelamalu! Similar stories. I enjoyed yours!<br /><br />Clouldn't get your link to work from Jeff B's.Maggie Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06183886005936250976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-20000076353939335352009-05-18T21:05:00.000+01:002009-05-18T21:05:00.000+01:00Excellent, Akelamalu!
LOVED the "ending!!!"
It m...Excellent, Akelamalu!<br /><br />LOVED the "ending!!!"<br /><br />It made me think about "I wonder what's going to happen??"<br /><br />Brava!Ronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15977027331657615697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-9472703570769579052009-05-18T20:58:00.000+01:002009-05-18T20:58:00.000+01:00a lovely story that takes place in one of my favor...a lovely story that takes place in one of my favorite parts of the world!Diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02946500110072411468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-55677808736658608202009-05-18T20:24:00.000+01:002009-05-18T20:24:00.000+01:00Oh you're very kind Thom thankyou m'dear. x
Yes i...Oh you're very kind <B>Thom</B> thankyou m'dear. x<br /><br />Yes it would <B>Citizen</B> :0<br /><br />Me too <B>Snowelf</B> :)<br /><br />Frannie was definitely too late when it mattered <B>Salute</B> :(<br /><br />Thanks <B>Daryl</B> x<br /><br />LOL yeah great minds eh <B>Watercats</B>!Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-2999392044680384032009-05-18T16:33:00.000+01:002009-05-18T16:33:00.000+01:00lol!.. there's probably something about great mind...lol!.. there's probably something about great minds and all that... lol!.. thanks for sharing!Batteson.Indhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10846214578565824955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-8725309631693094692009-05-18T16:02:00.000+01:002009-05-18T16:02:00.000+01:00Love it ..Love it ..Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-7284416332691013362009-05-18T15:15:00.000+01:002009-05-18T15:15:00.000+01:00I really enjoys reading your stories. Sounds like ...I really enjoys reading your stories. Sounds like Frannie was a day late and a dollar short.Salutehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06263606306221412531noreply@blogger.com