Friday, 17 February 2012

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #190 Valentine's Day....




"From A Secret Admirer" the card read with the dozen red roses.

Smiling to herself, she knew exactly who they were from, how lovely!

She would cook a special meal for her husband tonight.

Unfortunately, the card and the roses had to go,

she didn't want her husband to be jealous

or more importantly, suspicious!



Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
at

22 comments:

  1. Shockgrubz17 February 2012 at 07:22

    This may be the only time a cheater has made me smile! Good going on your fifty-five!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Cloudia17 February 2012 at 07:27

    hmmmmmm!



    Aloha from Waikiki
    Comfort Spiral

    > < } } ( ° >

    ReplyDelete
  3. Valerie17 February 2012 at 09:11

    Whoops! Hope the special meal worked!

    ReplyDelete
  4. MorningAJ17 February 2012 at 09:17

    Actually I got a card from an unknown admirer this year. It turned out to be a marketing ploy from one of my suippliers at work - but it kept Kguessing for a while.

    Nice 55

    Here's mine.

    ReplyDelete
  5. cheshire wife17 February 2012 at 10:09

    What a shame to throw the roses away!

    ReplyDelete
  6. Akelamalu17 February 2012 at 11:35

    Thanks Shockdubz, glad you liked it.

    I know Cloudia

    It probably did Valerie because he has no idea what's going on, yet!

    How exciting AJ, when did you tell him?

    It is Cheshire Wife, I suppose she could keep them and pretend she bought them for herself.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Empress Bee (of the high sea)17 February 2012 at 13:35

    oh poor thing, has to get rid of the roses, she should have just thanked HIM for them and he'd never admit he didn't send them!

    smiles, bee
    xoxoxoxoxo

    ReplyDelete
  8. Daryl17 February 2012 at 13:48

    uh oh ...

    ReplyDelete
  9. Akelamalu17 February 2012 at 14:43

    Hey that's a great idea Bee, I must remember that one ;)

    Mmmmmm Daryl ;)

    ReplyDelete
  10. G-Man17 February 2012 at 14:50

    Uh oh...Shenanigans!!
    But what a dumb move sending something to her house!
    Loved your 55 Ake
    You Rock The Empire!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

    ReplyDelete
  11. Brian Miller17 February 2012 at 15:19

    yeah that might just ruin the mood you know....smiles....uh oh

    ReplyDelete
  12. Maude Lynn17 February 2012 at 15:33

    Great 55!

    ReplyDelete
  13. katie eggeman17 February 2012 at 15:44

    You have been writing about wicked women lately, she should keep the roses,but make a great dinner.

    ReplyDelete
  14. anthonynorth17 February 2012 at 15:45

    Yep, I think best to keep him in the dark.

    ReplyDelete
  15. Shrinky17 February 2012 at 16:06

    Haaaaaaaaaaaaaa! I had a friend in London who did ditch a dozen long stemmed roses, for that very reason - I jest you not! (Her lover must have been pretty thick to have ever sent them to her in the first place..)

    ReplyDelete
  16. Ron17 February 2012 at 16:26

    "she didn't want her husband to be jealous

    or more importantly, suspicious!"

    Oh....good one, m'dear!!!

    I always love your finishes!

    Have a great weekend!!

    X

    ReplyDelete
  17. Raven17 February 2012 at 16:46

    Interesting twist there...and agreed: silly to leave so much evidence around.

    ReplyDelete
  18. Akelamalu17 February 2012 at 18:41

    Yeah it was a dumb thing to do G-man, I'm sure you wouldn't make that mistake! ;)

    I'm sure it would Brian ;)

    Thanks Mama Zen x

    I have and I don't know why Banker Chick :#

    I think so too Anthony

    Either he was stupid or he wanted her hubby to find out Shrinky :0

    Glad you enjoyed it Ron x

    Indeed Raven, got to get rid of the evidence.

    ReplyDelete
  19. Gledwood17 February 2012 at 19:08

    o i like it!

    ReplyDelete
  20. Commander Zaius17 February 2012 at 20:49

    LOL!!!!

    Very good!

    ReplyDelete
  21. Anonymous19 February 2012 at 12:43

    Bad wife!

    ReplyDelete
  22. Secret Agent Woman19 February 2012 at 23:26

    I think I'd have to come up with a cover story to get to keep the flowers.

    ReplyDelete

Hello little butterfly, what do you want to say?