She stood waiting patiently with the crowd at the stage door.
He was a marvelous singer, she had all his records.
It was understandable why he had so many fans.
She loved him. She hoped he would notice her.
As he came through the door he spotted her.
"What you doing here Mum?" he asked.
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Yeah, moms are their kids biggest fans.
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A case of non appreciating son?
ReplyDeleteAww, I do like this one, Pearl. Written like a Mum too.
ReplyDeleteHA! I didnt expect that .. good job.
ReplyDeleteIndeed they are Beach :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Cloudia x
He's not a mummy's boy de engineur ;)
Glad you liked it Valerie :)
Ah the little twist worked then Daryl. :)
oh THAT was a good one!!!
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"What you doing here Mum?" he asked."
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Oh, how SWEET!
I ALWAYS love your twists.
Clever lady you are!
Have a great weekend, m'dear!
X
Now that's a hip mum.
ReplyDeleteOMG, this totally floored me, I really DID NOT see that punch line coming - haaaaaaaaaaa!
ReplyDelete(And I have to blushingly admit it reminds me of me, when I snuck into a gig the eldest and his band performed - with my tripod and flash and all the paraphinallia - he wanted to throttle me..but boy, did I get some great stills - hehe!)
Patendly Pearl...
ReplyDeleteYou always come thru!
Wonderfully written Ake.
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Was he pleased to see her or not?
ReplyDeleteProbably the only way to get to see him! Nice one.
ReplyDeleteThankyou Bee x
ReplyDeleteSo pleased you enjoyed it Ron x
Indeed she is Anthony :)
Ah glad to hear the twist was a surprise Shrinky. I can imagine you doing that, you're a good mum. x
Why thankyou G-man, I aim to please. ;)
Who knows with kids Cheshire Wife? ;)
awww..this is cute and tender for me...glad he noticed her...
ReplyDeleteI never saw it coming! Great twist, Ake!
ReplyDeleteAw, his biggest fan!
ReplyDeleteHe has his mom as his biggest fan. I got the impression he didn't think about her a lot. What you doing here, mum. She should have been back stage.
ReplyDeleteLesson: Don't ever let your kids get famous!
ReplyDeleteOf course she's there, I'd be there too if I had a famous child! But I'd like to hope I didn't have to wait outside the stage door with the other groupies!
ReplyDeleteNice One Akey! Have A Fine Weekend!Rock On!
ReplyDeleteMum should have been in the front row!
ReplyDeleteI thought it was going to be a stalker with a giant knife
If you haven't, you really need to put a book together of these. They are so entertaining. I love the twists you put in your writing.
ReplyDeleteYou always manage it don't you? So very clever with words. x
ReplyDeleteThis is funny and poignant all at the same time!
ReplyDeleteSo am I Brian :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked the twist Mama Zen :)
She is SAW
Well I don't think he was expecting her BankerChick
You could be right there Silverthoughts2!
Well I would too Linda and like you I'd be on the front row not at the stage door!
Cheers Tony :)
Oooh I never thought of a stalker Dianne, still the twist was a surprise for you wasn't it?
Aw thanks Misty. Maybe when I get to 200 I'll put a little book together.
Why thankyou Lorraine, how kind of you to say that. x
Thanks Pat :)
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