Friday, 4 March 2011

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #154 Accident....


She pulled up at the lights and felt the jolt as the car behind touched her bumper.


Getting out of the car she went to survey the damage.


Looking at the driver she beckoned him to take a look,


then stared in amazement as he drove in pursuit of her BMW...


as it was highjacked!





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28 comments:

  1. A Daft Scots Lass4 March 2011 at 08:46

    awesome 55!!!

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  2. MorningAJ4 March 2011 at 09:33

    Please tell me that's not a true story!

    I've gone for a car tale this week too. Must be something in the air!

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  3. anthonynorth4 March 2011 at 11:09

    Enjoyed that. Great twist.

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  4. Brian Miller4 March 2011 at 11:54

    yikes...it was all a set up eh?

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  5. G-Man4 March 2011 at 12:32

    Were you visiting the States Ake?
    Hahahahaha...
    Loved your 55
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  6. Akelamalu4 March 2011 at 12:34

    Thanks Scots Lass :)

    Something very similar happened here a while back AJ. Strange how some of us choose a similar theme isn't it?

    Glad you enjoyed it Anthony :)

    Indeed it was Brian ;)

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  7. Commander Zaius4 March 2011 at 13:27

    Some days it just does not pay to get out of bed.

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  8. Finding Pam4 March 2011 at 15:25

    Exactly why I want to get my consealed handgun liscense. This sort of crime happens all the time where I go to shop for my groceries. I choose my time wisely when I go.

    A really great 55.

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  9. Ron4 March 2011 at 16:11

    You're endings ALWAYS blow me away!

    I don't know how you come up with these each week.

    Brilliant Flash 55!

    BRA-VA!

    Have a wonderful weekend, m' dear!

    X

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  10. Jannie Funster4 March 2011 at 17:39

    Geez, you just never know these days. THANK YOU for this, I'll be on the lookout for that kind of peep.

    xoxo

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  11. Akelamalu4 March 2011 at 17:43

    LOL no G-man, it happens here too!

    You're so right there Beach Bum!

    I don't think even the thought of something like that happening would induce me to carry a gun, even if it was legal here Pam!


    I'm so pleased you enjoy them Ron x

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  12. Akelamalu4 March 2011 at 17:44

    It could happen anywhere Jannie. :0

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  13. Dianne4 March 2011 at 18:15

    the old bump and grab
    happens here all the time
    every now and then the news will remind people not to fall for it

    good tale lady
    have a lovely weekend

    Hope sends hugs :)

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  14. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall4 March 2011 at 19:55

    a tight fight?

    intense 55, well done,

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  15. Charlene Amsden4 March 2011 at 23:37

    And it happens exactly that fast!

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  16. Maude Lynn5 March 2011 at 00:13

    Oh, no!

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  17. mrsnesbitt5 March 2011 at 11:59

    Always written with a twist! Awesome Pearl.

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  18. Akelamalu5 March 2011 at 16:18

    Glad you enjoyed it Dianne

    Thanks Jingle x

    I believe it does Quilly

    Oh yes Mama Zen :(

    Ooops indeed SAW

    Aw thanks Denise xx

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  19. aims5 March 2011 at 16:43

    I think you've got the Flash 55 down to a science. Well done!

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  20. Travis Cody5 March 2011 at 21:45

    Bastards!

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  21. Gledwood6 March 2011 at 02:10

    "Life is never in vain if people remember you"... that's very interesting. I think on that whenever I see it

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  22. Anonymous6 March 2011 at 11:48

    ...and THAT'S a bad day :)

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  23. Akelamalu6 March 2011 at 12:48

    Why thankyou Aims x

    Yes they are Trav!

    It's true Gleds

    Oh yes it is a very bad day SDBS.

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  24. Maggie May6 March 2011 at 17:37

    The cad!!!!!
    Maggie X

    Nuts in May

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  25. Akelamalu6 March 2011 at 18:02

    Cads and thieves Maggie!

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  26. Smalltown RN6 March 2011 at 21:56

    Very nice....quick, and like one of your other commentors says...you do seem to have this Flash 55 down pat....well done!

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  27. Unknown6 March 2011 at 22:49

    very well done! Superb

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  28. Akelamalu9 March 2011 at 12:28

    Thanks RN :)

    Cheers Dave :)

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