Friday, 8 October 2010

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #136 Contraband.....


Waiting for their luggage by the carousel, Bev noticed the sniffer dogs.



Having returned from Columbia, she was nervous,


Wiping away perspiration from her top lip, she whispered to Sean


"What if the dogs take an interest in our cases, considering what's in them?"


"Don't worry" he said


"they're looking for drugs not extra cigarettes!"




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26 comments:

  1. Up to your usual excellent standard. Heehee I was worried until I reached the end.

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  2. As long as there's no Smoking Gun...

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  3. You are always so clever. :) very well done. :)

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  4. Applause for both you and for Blogger not giving me that annoying No Service error message

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  5. i dunno...depends on whats in the cigarettes...smiles. fun 55.

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  6. Nice one. But those dogs are getting smarter.

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  7. Yes - as Anthony points out, maybe these dogs know what the smell of Too Many smells like...

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  8. Thanks Valerie, glad you enjoyed it.

    Oh definitely no gun Grandpa!

    Why thankyou Thom, you're very kind. x

    I'm pleased you're not getting that stupid message Daryl x

    Ah, what sort of cigarettes is the question Brian ;)

    Those dogs are brilliant Anthony!

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  9. That wouldn't surprise me at all Julia!

    If they were they'd surely home in on the extra fags wouldn't they Denise? ;)

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  10. Bwhahahahahahahahaha!

    OMG....I BUSTED out laughing when I read that last line!

    BRA-VA, dear lady!

    YOU. ARE. THE. BEST.

    Thanks for the great morning laugh, m'dear!

    Have a wonderful weekend!

    X

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  11. LOL. Good one. But... isn't tobacco a drug?

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  12. But if you say it out loud they'll still search you!

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  13. lol My suitcases had salami.
    Now I am not sure if the dogs could be swayed to take an extra sniff or two lol

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  14. Is it worth all that stress for a drag, whatever it's flavour?

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  15. Depends on what kind of smokes they are, hehe!

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  16. Akelamalu: hehehehe...heheh-hahaha. I know it's true. each time we came back from a cruise...I worried about that. I don't smoke but my girls does...

    now I'll worry about sniffer dogs...NO MORE : )

    have a great weekend sweetie.xxx

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  17. Hmmm, Brian stole my line. That's what I get for being so late! Oh well, I'll say it any way: as long as those ciggies aren't full of whacky tobaccy all should be fine!

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  18. Pearlie Mae...
    I thought you was talking about COFFEE?
    hahahahaha
    Rockin 55 Baby...
    Thanks for playing, and thanks for your kind words about Turkey.
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End....G

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  19. So there aren't any "Vice dogs" trained yet? Good. I'd fear the amount of chocolate they'd find on me. Well done friend!

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  20. Really? Ciggys are cheaper in Columbia? I too was thinking coffee.

    Super 55!!

    xo

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  21. Been there! LOL!





    Warm Aloha from Waikiki

    Comfort Spiral

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  22. Naughty travelers, but not too naughty I suppose.

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  23. I thought it was going to be coffee!

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  24. So glad you enjoyed it Ron x

    Technically I suppose it is Alice.

    That's true AJ LOL

    I'd be interested to know if the dogs would sniff out salami Lady's Life :)

    To a hardened smoker I think it is Cheshire Wife. Thankfully I don't smoke any more.

    Of course it does KB ;)

    I don't smoke Spiky but I do trying to bring back lots for my Dad - he's 86 and has smoked since he was 12! No chance of him giving up now.

    Precisely Quilly ;)

    Thanks Mama Zen :)

    Haha you were on the wrong track G-man x

    Oh no surely they won't get dogs to sniff out chocolate Hope?

    I think ciggies are cheaper everywhere except Britain Jannie!

    Me too Cloudia ;)

    No, not TOO naughty Trav ;)

    Ah you were on the same track as
    G-man SAW :)

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