Friday, 28 May 2010

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #120 Missing Person......



"Come Home Jeannie" Colin pleaded to his missing wife, on the television appeal.


"If you know where Jeannie is please ring this number."


She'd been missing for months and he hadn't heard a thing.


"It must be awful for that poor man" said Ben


"I don't know what I'd do if you disappeared."


Jeannie smiled.





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30 comments:

  1. Jinksy28 May 2010 at 07:21

    I'd call this succint smugness! :)

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  2. A Daft Scots Lass28 May 2010 at 07:27

    oooooo dark and twisted.

    I love it!

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  3. Elaine Denning28 May 2010 at 08:01

    Great one, Ak!

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  4. Anonymous28 May 2010 at 09:18

    That twisted jeannie. Did she live in a bottle by chance? ROFLMAO!!! Well done my friend. Have a great weekend :)

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  5. secret agent woman28 May 2010 at 12:39

    Ha ha ha. Ben better keep an eye on her!

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  6. Dianne28 May 2010 at 13:59

    ahhhh Jeannie isn't missing at all!! she's up to something
    good stuff lady :)

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  7. clean and crazy28 May 2010 at 14:01

    awesome 55, i thought he killed her!! they will think that soon!!

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  8. clean and crazy28 May 2010 at 14:01

    awesome 55, i thought he killed her!! they will think that soon!!

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  9. Daryl28 May 2010 at 14:18

    Another super twist

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  10. Menina28 May 2010 at 16:13

    this made me scoff! At first I assumed Jeannie has escaped from him, but maybe she is the one hurting him...

    Very good.

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  11. buffalodick28 May 2010 at 16:28

    I think I got it...

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  12. Valerie28 May 2010 at 16:37

    Oooo that's wicked.... and brilliant.

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  13. Ron28 May 2010 at 16:40

    OMG...that twist at the end was BRILLIANT!!!!

    BRAVA, m'dear!

    You never cease to amaze me!

    Hope you're having a wondeful time on your trip!

    Enjoy your weekend....X

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  14. Charlene Amsden28 May 2010 at 18:21

    Oh my goodness -- that first man must have been horrid to live with for Jeannie to take such pleasure in his suffering. Either that, or Jeannie is horrid and the first man should be rejoicing that she's gone!

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  15. nitebyrd29 May 2010 at 01:14

    Oh! Wicked story, Akelamalu. I LOVE it!

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  16. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall29 May 2010 at 01:20

    very impressive 55.
    love the idea and the set up!

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  17. Susan at Stony River29 May 2010 at 02:00

    I LIKE that one!
    :-D

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  18. Cloudia29 May 2010 at 02:38

    Oh that smile!



    Aloha from Hawaii, Sis

    Comfort Spiral

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  19. snowelf29 May 2010 at 03:00

    Hehehehehe I LOVE it. :)

    I also love that your health is good and you're feeling so splendid. Enjoy Scottland!!

    --snow

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  20. Linda29 May 2010 at 04:59

    Apparently Jeannie isn't missing at all - she knows right where she is!

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  21. MarmiteToasty29 May 2010 at 19:06

    Brilliant week in and week out LOL

    x

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  22. Travis Cody29 May 2010 at 19:07

    Now that's nice and twisty!

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  23. Spiky Zora Jones30 May 2010 at 09:28

    akelamalu: wha hahahaha. that's it, it fun and funny and has a tint of naughty. I think Rod sterling could have done a Twightlight Zone episode.

    boo!

    I like it honey.

    later sweets

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  24. lettuce30 May 2010 at 10:21

    ha@!

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  25. Bob Mac30 May 2010 at 12:05

    for a lancy lass you're not half bad. all joking aside , I loved this post

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  26. Maude Lynn30 May 2010 at 14:01

    I REALLY like this one, Ake!

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  27. Anonymous31 May 2010 at 14:06

    I thought I got it and then I read the comments and now I'm confused!!

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  28. Leah31 May 2010 at 17:02

    Awesome story!

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  29. Akelamalu3 June 2010 at 16:17

    Me too Jinksy

    Jeannie is very dark and very twisted Gillian ;)

    Thanks Laney x

    I think she just wanted to make her hubby suffer Thom ;)

    He should but he doesn't know her well enough SAW!

    You got it Dianne - Jeannie is only missing to her husband. ;)


    I think that's what Jeannie is hoping Clean&Crazy!


    Cheers Daryl :)

    Thanks Dumdad :)


    Well spotted Menina!


    I'm sure you did Buff :)


    Jeannie is the wicked one Valerie LOL


    I love you Ron, you're so appreciative. x We had a great time hon.


    It could be either of those reasons Quilly - you choose.


    Glad you enjoyed it Nitebyrd :)


    Pleased you liked it Jingle


    Thanks Susan :)

    Yes indeed, that smile says it all Cloudia!


    Oh thankyou Snowelf - on all counts. x


    She certainly does Linda!


    You're too kind Marmie, thanks chuck. x


    I try Trav ;)

    I thought you'd like it Spiky x

    Happy to make you smile Lettuce :)

    Us Lancy lasses aren't just pretty faces you know BobMac! LOL

    Glad you liked it Mama Zen :)

    It's whatever you read into it Eternally Distracted ;)

    Cheers Joy :)

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  30. Misty DawnS18 June 2010 at 17:00

    You seriously need to compile these in a book! They are so much fun to read!

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