Friday, 7 May 2010

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 117 Holding it together.....



I have to hold it all together, she thought.


They're all depending on me.


If I let go they'll fall apart.


They think I'm too weak, so I need to be strong and firm.


I have all the papers needed right here, altogether, ready for the meeting.


It's an important job being a paper clip!





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46 comments:

  1. It's vital to hold the paperwork together :-)
    Enjoyed that.

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  2. ROFLMAO!!! Oh Akelamalu you are a riot you know that. I so didn't even think of this. Well done. Genius I say :) Have a great Friday.

    xoxoxox

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  3. Oh, how clever. Paper clips are really good at keeping it together... Kinda envy them. :)
    Great 55! Well done! Love/ Jo.

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  4. LOL - Loved that... Very clever!

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  5. very clever Ak -had me going!

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  6. So darned clever this is!!! I guess the clip is a 'she' since it has many curves? Right?

    Mine is "LOST IN THE TRANSLATION"

    Have a great weekend! [and as always, scroll down a bit to find my 55]

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  7. Glad you enjoyed it Anthony :)

    Welcome Gillian and thankyou. :)

    You're too kind Thom, thanks hon.x

    I wish I could keep it together as well as a paper clip jarnebrand LOL

    Cheers Dumdad

    Pleased you liked it Eternally Distracted :)

    You didn't guess then Flowerpot? ;)

    Oh definitely female Hootin' Anni, which is why everything is so organised! ;)

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  8. Great "twist" and yes, important job for the clip.

    I'm up (with a few extra words):

    Friday Flash 55 ~ Butterfly Kisses

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  9. yeah it is, but watch out...staple is trying to steal your job. smiles. nice fun 55.

    mine is up!

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  10. ah, how very clever of you...life from the view of a paper clip! i absolutely love your humor, such a good 55!

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  11. you know that's really true! good job honey!

    smiles, bee
    xoxoxoxoxoxxo

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  12. i never thought being a paper clip was so important!! great 55!!

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  13. Ake, you always put a big smile on my face! Thanks! (hugs)

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  14. Brilliant, put a smile on my face on this gloomy Friday.

    CJ xx

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  15. Ha ha. I guess the poor paper clip has to stay one step ahead of the staple.

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  16. Unexpected ending. Thanks for the laugh!

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  17. Bravo!
    Excellent!
    I think I bomb out this week...oh please don't laugh...
    here
    Happy Friday!
    Happy Mother's Day!
    hugs
    shakira

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  18. I love endings like this. Makes me smile. My 55 is HERE .

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  19. Well, I didn't expect that. I love your unexpected endings.....

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  20. Aw thanks Marmie x

    I'm glad you enjoyed the twist Chef Kar :)

    Oh she's watching the staple Brian! ;)

    Why thankyou Sheri I'm happy you enjoyed it.

    Yes it is true Bee :)

    Neither did I until I thought about it Clean&Crazy. ;)

    Well I'm happy to make you smile Mona x

    Happy to make you smile any day Crystal Jigsaw :)

    Yes it does SAW ;)

    I'm pleased the twist worked for you Ivy & Haley :)

    Thanks Shakira :)

    My pleasure Monkey Man :)

    I enjoy writing a twist ending Valerie and I'm so glad you enjoy them. :)

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  21. akelamalu: hahaha...you have the most wonderful wit. I totally love it and I love these 55 flash fiction fridays with you.

    paper clip...hehehe.

    have afab weekend honey. xxx

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  22. Good one! I'm a staple man myself...

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  23. Can you get paperclips for the personality? I need something to hold myself together ;-)

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  24. This totally caught me by surprise!

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  25. Bwhahahahahahahahaaha!

    OMG...that is so funny!!!!

    You ALWAYS, ALWAYS, ALWAYS get me in the end!!!

    BRAVA!

    Have a great weekend, m'dear!

    X

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  26. LOL! You are the Queen of twist endings. This one is wonderful and I never saw it coming.

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  27. HA!

    Now let me ask you...are you thinking about gathering your Flash Fiction into a book? You're really good at it.

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  28. wow,
    your 55 rocks!
    I see you stay strong in your words...

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  29. Wrapped up really beautifully, very clever! Enjoyed reading it :)
    Short Poems

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  30. Haaaaaaaaa, excellent (clapping my hands)! You are so clever - smile.

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  31. Always so enjoyable, Dear.



    Glad to be back, Missed Ya!

    Aloha from Hawaii


    Comfort Spiral

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  32. Wow, until the very last minute I thought you were describing my southern girl guilt. ;)

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  33. Happy Mother's Day,my friend!
    You look BEAUTIFUL, then and NOW!
    You are such a wonderful friend and MOTHER!
    May this Mother's Day be one of the best with more to come in years!
    YOU ROCK, MOMMY!
    hugs
    shakira

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  34. Why thankyou Spiky x

    I prefer staples too Buff

    LOL good idea Gleds :)

    Great Mama Zen that was the result I wanted. :)

    Ah I'm so pleased you liked it Ron

    Thankyou so much Quilly :)

    I thought maybe if I get to about 500 I might Trav, thankyou. x

    Cheers Jingle

    Welcome Marinela and thankyou. :)

    Oh cheers Shrinky I'm glad you liked it.

    Glad you're back Cloudia and thanks hon. x

    You didn't second guess the ending then Hope, that's good :)

    Why thankyou Shakira and happy mother's day to you too.

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  35. Lol, that´s great! Hope you´ve had a good weekend. :-)

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  36. I was beginning to empathise with that person and realise thats how I feel....... and then it turned out to be a blimmen paper clip!!!!!!!!! LOL!

    Nuts in May

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  37. Thanks Evalinn and yes I have had a good weekend, I hope you have too. :)

    LOL I'm glad it gave you a laugh Maggie x

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  38. Cheers Tony :)

    The same to you Lady's Life :)

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  39. Made me laugh! And it is indeed an important job.

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  40. Too funny...love the way your mind works! Keep it together for this week will ya please!! :D

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  41. I truly love and enjoy your talents! Reading your writings always make me smile at your talent.

    You truly need to put all of these together in a book.

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