Friday, 17 October 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #48 No secrets

No Secrets

"Where did you end up last night?" she asked


"In the pub with the lads" he answered.


"Nowhere else?" she ventured.


"No."


"You know Mandy has a new job?" she said.


"Mmmmm, what's she doing?" he asked.


"She's scanning the CCTV cameras in town



and guess who she saw going into the Lap Dancing Club?"


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36 comments:

  1. Ron17 October 2008 at 06:25

    ooooh....I'm the first comment!!!

    Yeepee!

    BRAVO, Akelamalu!!!!

    This was FABULOUS!!!!

    BAD BOY!!!

    Well..I guess he'll be Lap Dancing alone on the couch tonight!

    HAHAHAHA!

    Have a great weekend, dear lady!

    Enjoyed this!

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  2. Elaine Denning17 October 2008 at 07:20

    This was great Ak! And I loved her expression, lol.

    (I actually caught my Mum's boyfriend going nto a 'grab a granny' night years ago when he was supposed to be at home fixing his car!)

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  3. Queenie17 October 2008 at 07:25

    Tut, Tut, good one!!!!

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  4. Lu'17 October 2008 at 11:01

    Ha this was good. Have a great Friday :)

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  5. storyteller17 October 2008 at 16:02

    Most entertaining as always! Hope you enjoy your weekend ;--)
    Hugs and blessings,

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  6. Empress Bee (of the high sea)17 October 2008 at 16:15

    oh man, he has so had it!

    smiles, bee
    xxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

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  7. sallywrites17 October 2008 at 16:41

    Well done you! Very clever!!

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  8. Pam17 October 2008 at 17:04

    ha ha lmao. good one, ake!

    i'm finally up.

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  9. Flowerpot17 October 2008 at 17:17

    Great Ak - well done!

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  10. buffalodick17 October 2008 at 17:44

    As a 35year veteran of getting away with it, I am the master of the less than straight answer...

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  11. Linda17 October 2008 at 18:30

    Busted!! It seems a man just can't any privacy these days, can he?!?

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  12. Akelamalu17 October 2008 at 19:02

    Spare room for him Ron, indefinitely!

    OMG Laney, did you tell your Mum? :0

    Tut, tut indeed Queenie!

    Thanks Lu, hope you have a good one too. x

    Enjoy your weekend too and thanks Storyteller.

    Oh yes he has Bee!

    Long time no see Sally, thanks m'dear.

    Cheers Ciara x

    Aw thanks Flowerpot x

    Ah but have you ever been caught on CCTV Buff?

    Busted is right Linda, he shouldn't tell lies! :)

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  13. cheshire wife17 October 2008 at 19:18

    You mean he's been on TV.

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  14. Barb17 October 2008 at 19:31

    Exactly 55 words? Wow.. you rock! I love the pictures you used to illustrate the story. :)

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  15. Real Live Lesbian17 October 2008 at 19:49

    Great job! I always love these!

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  16. Deb17 October 2008 at 20:43

    Perfect story told in 55 words! Happy weekend! :)

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  17. Anonymous18 October 2008 at 00:23

    The sequel - 55 words about divorce court.

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  18. Sandi McBride18 October 2008 at 02:55

    Wonderful story telling, beginning to end! Loved it...loved him getting caught, too lol
    hugs
    Sandi

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  19. Donnetta18 October 2008 at 03:32

    Great, "A!" Oh, the irony of it. My 55 is up, too. D

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  20. la bellina mammina18 October 2008 at 04:44

    " Er, who..??" asked he, not smartly knowing where this is leading, still hungover... ;-)

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  21. Mona18 October 2008 at 06:09

    CCTV are like Big brother watching!

    Errant husbands beware!

    Great 55ve Ake!

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  22. Akelamalu18 October 2008 at 10:29

    Close circuit TV yes Cheshire Wife :)

    I have Google images to thank for the pictures Skittles, glad you like it.

    Thanks RLL x

    Happy Weekend to you too Deb, so pleased you enjoyed it.

    Ah, that's an idea Citizen ;)

    He deserved to get caught didn't he Sandi?

    Thanks Donnetta x

    Ah yes Bella, not smart enough to know when to quit!

    Yes indeedy MonaBig brother is watching!

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  23. G-Man18 October 2008 at 12:28

    hehehehe..(Must hide face, must hide face)
    Loved this one Ake, of course that could have been me.
    Thanks for playing, sorry I'm so late. I read your previous post..What a Jip!!
    Have a Great Week-End....G

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  24. Akelamalu18 October 2008 at 12:37

    You do that g-mna??? ;)

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  25. MarmiteToasty18 October 2008 at 13:55

    Brilliant lol

    x

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  26. Akelamalu18 October 2008 at 17:19

    Aw thanks Marmie x

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  27. Travis Cody19 October 2008 at 05:15

    Ooops. Looks like somebody is going to be in trouble!

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  28. x19 October 2008 at 19:10

    oh my gosh, this 1 made me laugh. it's very clever, ake. i love your materials. hehe. =D

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  29. Akelamalu21 October 2008 at 07:20

    Yep he sure is Trav!

    Thank you Acey you're very kind.

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