Friday, 11 July 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 35 Just a Job

Just A Job


Hello darlin’, lookin’ for a good time? she said peering seductively through heavily mascaraed eyes.















I’m doing a special offer at the moment only £20.









'Ere open the door and we’ll go somewhere quiet.



























It’s not far and we won’t be disturbed.


She waited for his answer.



“Fantastic” said the director “You got the part”.















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19 comments:

  1. Pam11 July 2008 at 07:39

    good one, ake! here i thought you were going tart-y on us. ha ha :) mine is up early! lol

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  2. Flowerpot11 July 2008 at 10:11

    I love the picture too!

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  3. Real Live Lesbian11 July 2008 at 13:55

    Great pic and tons of story in a tiny amount of words!

    Of course, I want to know MORE!!!!

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  4. Empress Bee (of the high sea)11 July 2008 at 14:15

    now i wonder what the part was for??? ha ha ha

    smiles, bee
    xoxoxoxoxoxo

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  5. Linda11 July 2008 at 16:01

    You wicked, wicked woman - love it!

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  6. Akelamalu11 July 2008 at 17:14

    Tarty me Ciara??? Never ;)

    Thanks Flowerpot

    Well the play was a huge success of course RLL! :)

    A companion of course Bee ;)

    I am naughty Linda, I admit it! :)

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  7. Mona11 July 2008 at 18:47

    Ouch! is it the casting couch!?

    Lol! what else! After all it does exist!

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  8. Marianne11 July 2008 at 20:08

    Hilarious! You're so good at these, I love them. The pictures are hilarious too, great work Ak x M

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  9. Ron11 July 2008 at 20:10

    APPLAUSE, APPLAUSE, APPLAUSE!!!!

    BRAVO!

    You are so CREATIVE, dear lady!

    (I can actually hear Donna Summers singing, "She Works Hard for the Money"!)

    Thanks for yet, another enjoyable Flash 55!

    Have FAB weekend!

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  10. Mike Golch11 July 2008 at 20:48

    Good one LUV. Hugs and Blessing. That's my story and I'm sticking to it.

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  11. storyteller11 July 2008 at 21:09

    Yup ... ya surprised me again. Amazing how you produce these clever little twists that 'get us' even when we're anticipating them. Well done!
    Hugs and blessings,

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  12. Mojo11 July 2008 at 21:27

    Clever twist there at the end dearie. Like it a lot.

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  13. Anonymous11 July 2008 at 22:54

    hehehe - I like the twist at the end. ;-)

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  14. Dianne11 July 2008 at 23:18

    excellent! and she went on to have a wonderful long career as "Harriet, the Hooker with a Heart".

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  15. smarmoofus12 July 2008 at 00:01

    Ake! I love it! *laughing* You're great with those twists.

    -smarmoofus

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  16. Travis Cody12 July 2008 at 00:51

    Have a lovely weekend dear!

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  17. Sandi McBride12 July 2008 at 02:37

    Why you have surprised me...never knew you could play the tart, lol! Well done, brava!
    Sandi

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  18. G-Man12 July 2008 at 03:57

    You just dangle the carrot, then snatch it away...hehehehe
    Great Job Ake!!!!
    I loved this 55..Thanks for playing, and have a great week-end!
    Galen xo

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  19. Akelamalu12 July 2008 at 11:01

    Possibly Mona ;)

    Thanks Marianne :)

    You are so right Ron, that song would go perfectly with it! Thanks honey. x

    Cheers Mike :)

    It's great when people say the twist got them, thanks Storyteller x

    Welcome Mojo, glad you enjoyed it.

    You have a good weekend too Rebicmel and thanks.

    Thanks for stopping by Kaknu glad you enjoyed it.

    Harriet, the Hooker with a Heart - now why didn't I think of that Dianne ? I love it. x

    Thanks smarmoofus, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. :)

    And the same to you Trav, thanks honey.

    I have a lot of hidden depths Sandi :)

    That's what women do g-man ((wink, wink))

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