Friday, 16 May 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #27 Dinner?

Dinner?


“I know we’ve only just met but come to dinner?’ he asked
“7.30 tomorrow, I’ll cook, here’s my address.”



“What a lovely place, are these new carpets, they’re still covered in plastic?”



“Impressive range of knives and pans you have, you obviously like cooking.”



“Oh I do” he said
What’s for dinner?” she asked



“You”!






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27 comments:

  1. Pam16 May 2008 at 07:35

    very cleverly done, ake! yes, your daddy's right...you have a great imagination! xo my 55 will be up at midnight here on my side of the world lol

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  2. Unknown16 May 2008 at 08:55

    Well done! I just clicked past a TV channel last night to avoid seeing Hannibal only to meet him here!

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  3. Flowerpot16 May 2008 at 08:56

    well done ak - as ever. I never saw Hannibal - there's no way I'd sleep again if I did!

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  4. buffalodick16 May 2008 at 11:28

    I'll bring the Chianti....

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  5. Smalltown RN16 May 2008 at 12:01

    Once again you are creative as always...and yes like the previous commentor I too shall bring some Chianti

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  6. Laura Jane Williams16 May 2008 at 12:51

    NOOOOOOO!

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  7. G-Man16 May 2008 at 13:29

    Well Ake...
    have the lambs stopped screaming?

    Great job sweetie!!!
    Everyone but Smoofy is a bit on the Dark Side today!!

    Have a great week-end!

    Galen..xox

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  8. Empress Bee (of the high sea)16 May 2008 at 13:59

    very well done my friend!

    smiles, bee
    xoxoxxoxoxoxoxo

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  9. Anonymous16 May 2008 at 14:22

    Hard to get creepier than Hannibal Lecter. Good ending.

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  10. Jo Beaufoix16 May 2008 at 15:23

    Hee hee, fabulous as usual. Catching up here. Loved the doodles and hope Dan had a fab birthday. Have a brill weekend lovely Akela.

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  11. Sandi McBride16 May 2008 at 15:56

    HOW DID YOU KNOW THAT HANNIBAL WAS MY FAVORITE CHARACTER! I liked this nearly as much as doodle week, lol...
    Sandi

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  12. Akelamalu16 May 2008 at 17:32

    I'll be over to read your later Ciara, thanks honey. x

    Ooops sorry Nick, you were destined to meet him!

    It's a scary film that's for sure Flowerpot, and thanks.

    I'll get the glasses out Buff!

    Oh and an extra glass for you RN. x

    YEEEEESSSSSS GIM :0

    It must be the hot weather g-man! :)

    Thankyou Bee xx

    Yup Hannibal was definitely creepy Citizen!

    Thanks on all counts Jo, hope you have a great weekend too. x

    You like Hannibal Sandi? Let's pretend I wrote it just for you then. x

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  13. Dianne16 May 2008 at 18:36

    I love that the carpet is still covered in plastic! Fantastic detail.

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  14. Mona16 May 2008 at 19:35

    {{{SHUDDER}}}

    This reminds me of a real life incident in my sister's neighborhood, where a psychopath Nanny killed & cooked the baby for dinner!

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  15. maryt/theteach16 May 2008 at 19:40

    Akelamau, great fiction piece! But when I read there was plastic on the carpet I just knew there was going to be trouble - I guess I watch CSI and Law and Order too much! Ha! :)

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  16. Akelamalu16 May 2008 at 19:46

    Thanks Dianne x

    OMG is that true Mona? :0

    Me too Teach! ;)

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  17. storyteller16 May 2008 at 19:54

    Ohmygosh … that one took me totally by surprise until I saw the last photo!!! I’ve shared a bit of what I’ve learned in my Photoshop Elements class on each of my blogs today … all in Haiku … with illustrations because I’m having such fun playing with possibilities ;--)
    Hugs and blessings,

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  18. snowelf16 May 2008 at 23:11

    Whoa! Yikes!!

    Wasn't Anthony Hopkins just an excellent Hannibal!! One of my favorite movies of all time. :)

    --snow

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  19. Odat17 May 2008 at 00:09

    aha! got me again.....good one.

    Peace

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  20. Ron17 May 2008 at 01:44

    eeeeewwww! This one gave me the CHILLS!!

    VERY, VERY GOOD!!!

    Wasn't it the most scariest movie??

    I loved it!

    As always...you're brilliant, Akelamalu!

    I so enjoy these!

    Have a great weekend, my friend!

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  21. Donnetta17 May 2008 at 02:23

    Ah, Anthony, my favorite man in the whole wide world! This was neat-fun. Of course, I have a warped sense of humor!
    Donnetta

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  22. bindhiya17 May 2008 at 05:18

    OMG!
    That was scary!
    Well done...
    Sweetie, how am gonna sleep now...

    have a good weekend!
    love and ((hugs))
    bindi

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  23. Akelamalu17 May 2008 at 09:24

    Ah the surprise worked Storyteller :)

    Antony Hopkins was fantastic as Hannibal - too real Snowelf!

    Thanks Odat :)

    You're very kind Ron, thanks honey. x


    I love everything Antony does too Donnetta :)


    Oh no, don't have nightmares Bindi :(

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  24. Travis Cody18 May 2008 at 19:36

    HA! I kept waiting for the twist, but you tweaked it by going exactly for the obvious!

    Well done!

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  25. Misty DawnS19 May 2008 at 00:52

    Bwahahahahaha - I LOVE it!! I think this is my favorite one so far!!!

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  26. Akelamalu19 May 2008 at 16:22

    Got to keep you on your toes Trav :)

    Cheers Misty x

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  27. KB20 May 2008 at 10:46

    I loooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeee that movie. Thanks for commenting on my first 55. I'll have another crack at one on Friday, it sure is fun!

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