Friday, 18 April 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 23 Vandals

Vandals




“We’ll have to stop” said Brad “Don’t open the windows.”

“That crowd looks angry”, said Karen.

One of them pulled off a wiper whilst another tugged at the wing mirror.




“Drive, now, Brad please!”

They were all over the car now, banging, menacing, screeching.


“Hell” said Brad “We’re not coming to the safari park again!”


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30 comments:

  1. Pam18 April 2008 at 08:18

    lmao another great and humorous 55, ake.

    i've tried my hand at one, but don't know if i'll do it regularly. xo

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  2. Flowerpot18 April 2008 at 09:10

    I wouldnt know where to start!!

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  3. la bellina mammina18 April 2008 at 09:47

    SUSPENSEFUL!!! Yay!

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  4. lettuce18 April 2008 at 09:52

    hi lamalu

    your previous post has got me thinking about mullets...

    :o/


    (not that i ever had one myself, i HASTEN to add)

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  5. Laura Jane Williams18 April 2008 at 10:58

    I bet Karen and Brad were in the monkey section. Monkeys are mean!

    x

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  6. Smalltown RN18 April 2008 at 11:27

    As always, creative my friend....good morning and happy Friday to you!!!

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  7. snowelf18 April 2008 at 12:18

    hehehehe! I've never been to a safari park, but it always sounds like fun! :)

    Have a great weekend!!

    --snow

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  8. buffalodick18 April 2008 at 12:41

    Funny! We went to one once, and were bullied by an ostrich!

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  9. G-Man18 April 2008 at 13:30

    hehehehe...

    They must have smelled 'food'...

    Great job as always Ake!!

    Thanks for being the 1st to let me know...G

    Have a great week-end.xo

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  10. Julia Phillips Smith18 April 2008 at 14:17

    I like your character names - my husband's name is Brad and his sister is Karen. I wonder if they recall this safari...?

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  11. bindhiya18 April 2008 at 14:46

    Great job Akelamalu!
    Have a wonderful weekend!!
    ♥ & ((hugs))
    bindi

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  12. MarmiteToasty18 April 2008 at 15:46

    Ha....... I guessed this one at the 'wipers' :)..... still great though.....

    x

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  13. Akelamalu18 April 2008 at 16:48

    Thanks Ciara, I just read yours and it fab!

    Sure you would Flowerpot, you're a great writer!

    I tried Bella ;)

    You know I used to quite like the 'Mullet' Lettie - am I sad?

    Yep GIM definitely the bad monkeys!

    Happy Friday to you too RN and thanks. x

    I was frightened of stopping when I went Snowelf!

    LOL Buff, mind you they are a bit viscious!

    I bet they did g-man, that's teach them to take a packed lunch!

    Ask them Julia, it would be funny if they did! :)

    Thanks Bindi and the same to you honey.

    You just couldn't keep away could you Marmie, you're supposed to be resting! xx

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  14. Cha Cha18 April 2008 at 18:01

    I've never been to a safari park either...

    ...after reading THIS I don't know if I will!

    This was really cute. I love animals.

    And, as always, your images along with your words, provide a flow like no other...

    Very cool.

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  15. storyteller18 April 2008 at 19:22

    Fun ‘take’ for your ‘55’ this week! You always surprise (and delight)! Thanks for visiting my Haiku at Small Reflections this morning. I’ve got even more ‘ku (with additional links) at Sacred Ruminations today ;--)
    Hugs and blessings,

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  16. Cath18 April 2008 at 19:50

    Very good. Very clever. Had me gripped - and then smile at the end.

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  17. Dianne18 April 2008 at 20:06

    loved it! so clever and so funny

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  18. goatman18 April 2008 at 20:34

    Thought I would pop over the pond and see what you were up to. I see. . . dialog games, how fun!
    Been awhile, glad to know you are faring as well as any of us.
    Happy springtime to ye.

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  19. Odat18 April 2008 at 22:47

    ha!!! Sooo true....good twist..wasn't expecting that!
    Peace

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  20. Ron19 April 2008 at 02:32

    Excellent once again!!!!!

    This reminded me of when I lived in Florida and we would go to Lion Country Safari!

    GGGGRRRAAAW!

    Have a great weekend, Akelamalu!

    I know you're enjoying Spring!

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  21. Akelamalu19 April 2008 at 08:57

    Safara Parks are great fun Strumpet, you'd enjoy it.

    Thanks Storyteller.

    Just what I intended Cath! :)

    Thank you Dianne, you're very kind.

    Nice to see you Goatman and thanks for dropping by.

    Glad you liked it Odat x

    Cheers Ron x Spring? If only! :(

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  22. maryt/theteach19 April 2008 at 16:06

    Bwahahahaha! I love it! Very funny, A. :)

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  23. Dumdad19 April 2008 at 16:40

    Good one! (again)

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  24. Jo Beaufoix19 April 2008 at 18:18

    Fabulous as usual Akela. :D
    Oh, and tag, I have memed you. :D

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  25. Travis Cody20 April 2008 at 02:39

    I'll chime in with another nicely done!

    I remember taking a tram through a wild animal park, but I can't recall where it was. I want to say Balboa Park in San Diego, but I don't know if that is right.

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  26. Misty DawnS20 April 2008 at 04:33

    I always look forward to reading these and I am NEVER disappointed. Your talent never ceases to amaze me!

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  27. Akelamalu20 April 2008 at 10:48

    Glad you enjoyed it Teach :)

    Cheers Dumdad x

    Thanks Jo, I'll take a look at the tag later.

    A tram through a wildlife park Trav - no lions I hope? :)

    You're too kind Misty, but thankyou.xx

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  28. smarmoofus21 April 2008 at 04:52

    heheh I just finished watching "No End In Sight" before reading this, so of course I thought the worst. Definitely didn't have a safari park in mind! *giggles* So cute!

    -smarmoofus

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  29. Akelamalu21 April 2008 at 17:01

    Thanks Smarmoofus :)

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  30. LA Nickers27 April 2008 at 22:12

    Sputtering with laughter here!

    Blessings,
    Linda
    Nickers and Ink

    CAUGHT TO THE QUICK, at Nickers and Ink

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