Friday, 29 February 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #16 Message In A Bottle

In honour of Mimi's new Meme......


Message in a Bottle


Carrie picked up the bottle on the beach and read the message.



If you find this please get help.





I am fast running out of food and the natives are getting restless.




Phone this number and tell Jack to come quick.





I’m locked in my mobile burger van and can’t get out for more supplies.



Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by susiestheboss. If you want to take part pop over and let Susie know when you've posted your 55.



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35 comments:

  1. Flowerpot29 February 2008 at 09:43

    brilliant, AK. Your technology leaves me speechless!

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  2. Dianne29 February 2008 at 14:02

    love it! perfect use of words and photos.

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  3. bindhiya29 February 2008 at 14:34

    Funny!
    Wonderful photos to go with..
    I know this what I love your place. and your profile picture is beautiful..
    love & ((hugs))
    bindi

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  4. Pam29 February 2008 at 16:42

    that's cute & funny...you're doing pretty well w the 55s! :)

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  5. Jo's-D-Eyes29 February 2008 at 16:46

    hey Akelamalu,
    this photo's are also funny and not even from a bad quality!, even sharp though , good for little photo's beside9 or aside? for adds at whatevers little stories, I like the bottle haha , Whats your message? How are you doing?

    Have a great weekend
    Visit my blog, see my abract Skies.
    JoAnn from Holland

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  6. Mona29 February 2008 at 17:25

    hehehe..a mobile van.. who would have thought!

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  7. Akelamalu29 February 2008 at 18:40

    Thanks Flowerpot but what technology? Do you mean the pictures? I found them on google images!

    You're very kind Dianne, thank you.

    Glad you enjoyed it Bindi thank you. :)

    Aw cheers Ciara x

    Thanks JoAnn I'll be over shortly. :)

    You didn't guess then Mona?

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  8. Linda29 February 2008 at 18:44

    Dang, now I am craving a big ole' juicy burger with all the works!

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  9. James Goodman29 February 2008 at 20:24

    That was an outstanding 55. Nicely done. :D

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  10. Mimi Lenox29 February 2008 at 21:21

    Lol. That's priceless. You have bottles on the brain I see...and burgers! It looks good. Thanks for honoring my new meme, my friend.
    You are awesome and I love ya!

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  11. storyteller29 February 2008 at 22:10

    How fun! I may need to check out this activity ... but then I do Haiku on Fridays so maybe I'll just enjoy yours.
    Hugs and blessings,

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  12. Unknown29 February 2008 at 23:34

    Nice one!

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  13. la bellina mammina1 March 2008 at 00:40

    Great one! The title grabbed me, as it was the title of a (sad) movie I love.

    p.s ask me some day about the capital punishment here in Singapore - I am for it!

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  14. Little Wing1 March 2008 at 01:19

    Good job!
    Mobile burger van, how cool would that be!

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  15. Ron1 March 2008 at 04:34

    What a HOOT Akelamalu!

    You're a WIZ at these things!!!

    Hey...and I would LOVE to take a BIG bite out of the burger right now. I'm not a huge beef eater, but when I DO...it's always a burger, fries and a coke.

    5 Guys Burger's in the US are the BEST! If you ever visit here...I'll take you a MWM out to lunch!

    Enjoy your weekend, dear lady!

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  16. Barb1 March 2008 at 06:19

    What a nice way to combine two things!

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  17. Akelamalu1 March 2008 at 08:56

    Go get one Linda!

    Cheers James. :)

    You're welcome Mimi xx

    You should try 55 fiction Storyteller I think you'd enjoy doing it.

    Thanks Pauline x

    Glad you enjoyed it Bella. You should do a post about Capital Punishment in Singapore.

    Mobile burger vans are commonplace here Little Wing!

    You're very kind Ron. If ever MWM and I get to the States I'll be sure to let you know and look forward to enjoying a burger with you. xx

    I try Skittles :)

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  18. buffalodick1 March 2008 at 12:37

    A clever piece of work! Different from the others, for sure!

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  19. Unknown1 March 2008 at 14:58

    Wow What fun this is, Thanks

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  20. Diana Joy1 March 2008 at 15:39

    hahahaha!
    That's great!
    Thanks sooooo much for stopping by and encouraging me :)
    You are a true friend!
    I am doing much better and I am getting stronger every day. Now I am just finishing up what God has asked me to do....I guess what I believe is my purpose for being here....I am handing my book over to the publisher on Monday! I am so excited!!!!
    Thanks for loving me, caring enough to come by daily, and always asking :)
    Love,
    Diana Joy

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  21. the rotten correspondent1 March 2008 at 16:32

    Why do I feel hungry after reading that??

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  22. Akelamalu1 March 2008 at 17:12

    Why thank you Buffalo :)

    Glad you enjoyed it Dave

    Oh it's good to see you Diana Joy, I was getting real worried about you honey. x

    You need a hamburger Correspondent! :)

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  23. Travis Cody1 March 2008 at 21:31

    Now that's funny!

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  24. MarmiteToasty2 March 2008 at 10:10

    Just smiling, like I do everytime I come over here.....

    HAPPY MUVVERS DAY to you dear friend....

    x

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  25. Akelamalu2 March 2008 at 10:45

    Happy to make you smile Trave!

    Thanks Marmie - Happy Mothers Day to you too! xx

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  26. x2 March 2008 at 11:40

    this was funny, akelamalu! :)

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  27. Lo Kelween2 March 2008 at 12:07

    ha, yes it's funny but nice. love the pics. :)

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  28. Akelamalu2 March 2008 at 16:19

    Thank you Acey :)

    Glad you liked it Elween. What's wrong with your blog I can't get on it?

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  29. Maggie May2 March 2008 at 17:03

    Hi, I have just come across your blog which looks really interesting, so thought I would stop a while & say, "Hello"

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  30. Akelamalu2 March 2008 at 17:26

    Hello Maggie May, nice to meet you. Thanks for taking the time to comment I hope you'll call in again. :)

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  31. ~ej3 March 2008 at 02:56

    wonderful :-)

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  32. Odat3 March 2008 at 17:02

    Good work!!! Made me smile!
    Peace

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  33. Akelamalu3 March 2008 at 17:05

    Thank you Elena and Odat xx

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  34. S4 March 2008 at 03:06

    That was most excellent and fun too! SOrry I am late, in fact, I didnt even write my own 55 this week, oops!

    THanks for playing 55 with us.

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  35. Akelamalu4 March 2008 at 15:43

    Thanks Susie, I noticed you hadn't done one this week, next week hopefully. :)

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