tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post8177885113049085091..comments2024-02-26T07:14:39.823+00:00Comments on Everything And Nothing: Portrait Of Words # 8Akelamaluhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-7705696349806916042009-04-17T21:49:00.000+01:002009-04-17T21:49:00.000+01:00Jacob certainly left us wondering who he was and f...Jacob certainly left us wondering who he was and finding out he was a part of the jury was interesting. Also he seemed very anxious to have this jury conclude while criticising the crossword guy for not paying attention.<br />Very good story :)A Lady's Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11973102350411443282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-31412723164285704172009-04-17T12:56:00.000+01:002009-04-17T12:56:00.000+01:00Oh thankyou Cloudia I'm so pleased you enjoyed it....Oh thankyou <B>Cloudia</B> I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. <br /><br />How kind you are in your comments <B>Linda</B>, thankyou m'dear. xx<br /><br />I'm pleased you enjoyed my story <B>Alice</B>, it is fun writing them and reading others. :)Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-69462865900366566142009-04-17T07:57:00.000+01:002009-04-17T07:57:00.000+01:00A very well written story, Akelamalu. I much enjoy...A very well written story, Akelamalu. I much enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the totally wonderful comment you left on my blog today, and yes, it is very interesting and wonderful how everyone has a different take on the photo prompts, and writes a totally different story. Such fun.Alice (in BC Canada)https://www.blogger.com/profile/09512112540193806978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-76876395877117097492009-04-17T02:13:00.000+01:002009-04-17T02:13:00.000+01:00You have such an amazing way with words that one c...You have such an amazing way with words that one can actually feel the heat in the courtroom while reading this!Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05698969349369789642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-50680039945522585862009-04-16T21:52:00.000+01:002009-04-16T21:52:00.000+01:00Your writing goes down smooth...
leaving tart and ...Your writing goes down smooth...<br />leaving tart and pleasant afterglow.Well done as usual my island sistah! AlohaCloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-50361833927039860822009-04-16T11:14:00.000+01:002009-04-16T11:14:00.000+01:00Oh you're too kind to me Spiky, thanks honey. x
A...Oh you're too kind to me <B>Spiky</B>, thanks honey. x<br /><br />Actually someone in England did do a crossword when on jury service <B>Jeff</B>, though it was some time ago!<br /><br />I'm pleased the twist worked <B>Cath</B>. :)<br /><br />Me too <B>Dr. John</B> ;)<br /><br />You've missed my POWs <B>Ron</B>??? How could you??? (wink). Glad you liked it m'dear. x<br /><br />More than likely <B>Lu</B>!<br /><br />Why thank you <B>David</B> coming from a 'proper' writer that is a compliment indeed. :)Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-39552165861171937532009-04-16T04:27:00.000+01:002009-04-16T04:27:00.000+01:00Hi Pearl, Jeff's challenges are always terrific. A...Hi Pearl, Jeff's challenges are always terrific. And your stories equally so.david mcmahonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18009095220051075552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-91940926035018606072009-04-16T02:48:00.000+01:002009-04-16T02:48:00.000+01:00Good story if he would have called the cops first ...Good story if he would have called the cops first he would be at the victims trail and not his own.Lu'https://www.blogger.com/profile/11278553170295772582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-33939092169001449002009-04-15T23:41:00.000+01:002009-04-15T23:41:00.000+01:00This is the first of your Portrait of Words I've r...This is the first of your Portrait of Words I've read and as usual, my friend...you are one clever writer!<br /><br />Like some others have expressed, I LOVED the whole crossword puzzle element!<br /><br />Great job, Akelamalu!<br /><br />Thoroughly enjoyed!<br />XRonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15977027331657615697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-79053705637699328152009-04-15T23:07:00.000+01:002009-04-15T23:07:00.000+01:00Very well done.
I always like a little surprise on...Very well done.<br />I always like a little surprise on the end.Dr.Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02752941912945095736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-27301277207752067442009-04-15T22:00:00.000+01:002009-04-15T22:00:00.000+01:00Well constructed. Had me fooled too as to who Jaco...Well constructed. Had me fooled too as to who Jacob is.Cathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01247084030899971480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-14193138856055167562009-04-15T20:36:00.000+01:002009-04-15T20:36:00.000+01:00To think that someone on a murder trial would actu...To think that someone on a murder trial would actually be doing a crossword. yikes!<br /><br />Thanks for joining in with another great story.Thom - - Dr. Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10934715484719554704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-21499480008849974872009-04-15T19:25:00.000+01:002009-04-15T19:25:00.000+01:00when a story gets my emoptions going...it has to b...when a story gets my emoptions going...it has to be good.<br /><br />And this story is so very good.<br /><br />Ciao sweetie...Spiky Zora Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09283587481327552086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-61204873594644280152009-04-15T18:49:00.000+01:002009-04-15T18:49:00.000+01:00Nice to see you back Gewels, glad you liked the st...Nice to see you back <B>Gewels</B>, glad you liked the story. x<br /><br />Ah glad you liked the little twist <B>Daryl</B> :)<br /><br />Thanks <B>Nessa</B> x<br /><br />Glad you enjoyed the story and the music <B>Mary</B> x<br /><br />Gosh you're on the move AGAIN <B>Tony</B> LOL Have a great time. :)Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-23684798662131621782009-04-15T17:53:00.001+01:002009-04-15T17:53:00.001+01:00Yes! Yes! Good Stuff.I,m off to London tommorrow!H...Yes! Yes! Good Stuff.I,m off to London tommorrow!Have A Fine Weekend.Regards<br />Tony.tonyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03746435400444226665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-36239590884420000732009-04-15T17:53:00.000+01:002009-04-15T17:53:00.000+01:00Akalamalu, thanks very much for the story and Stev...Akalamalu, thanks very much for the story and Stevie Wonder! :)maryt/theteachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17516961981692076719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-52769351497786980362009-04-15T17:15:00.000+01:002009-04-15T17:15:00.000+01:00Very well done.Very well done.Nessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07779269921583131094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-50244144744977712662009-04-15T16:10:00.000+01:002009-04-15T16:10:00.000+01:00Ah .. well done, fooled me there I was sure Jacob ...Ah .. well done, fooled me there I was sure Jacob was the judge ..Darylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08241795455748298624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-15530192951670425522009-04-15T15:43:00.000+01:002009-04-15T15:43:00.000+01:00Nice job Akela... You do come up with some very cr...Nice job Akela... You do come up with some very creative stories. <br /><br />Thanks for visiting. I've been remiss in blogging these days. It's not that I don't love you though!<br />xoxoGEWELShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15667187693235282985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-20921590830301247672009-04-15T15:18:00.000+01:002009-04-15T15:18:00.000+01:00Ah yes, the power of persuasion Thom, I wish I had...Ah yes, the power of persuasion <B>Thom</B>, I wish I had it! ;) Glad you enjoyed the story m'deario. :)<br /><br />Oh thanks <B>Nick</B> :)<br /><br />Yes that's what I meant <B>Maggie</B> how we all see a different story in the pictures. :)<br /><br />The pictures give the idea behind whatever story we wish to weave <B>Flowerpot</B> :)<br /><br />Glad you like them <B>JAPRA</B> x<br /><br />Oh you're right <B>Connie</B>, it's not clear. Thanks for pointing that out I've been back and corrected it now - it wasn't the victim who picked anyone up it was the defendent. :0<br /><br />Cheers <B>Pam</B> I'm pleased you enjoyed it. <br /><br />I think you would do a marvelous job of these if only you had the time <B>G-man</B> xxAkelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-562402151253036842009-04-15T13:54:00.000+01:002009-04-15T13:54:00.000+01:00I wish I had the time for this, you hang with some...I wish I had the time for this, you hang with some very creative peeps Ake.<br />Just as you are!G-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-63519800046457839432009-04-15T13:32:00.000+01:002009-04-15T13:32:00.000+01:00Akelamula,You have written another great story. I ...Akelamula,You have written another great story. I enjoyed it.Finding Pamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07671978828279304904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-47272167758423380022009-04-15T12:39:00.000+01:002009-04-15T12:39:00.000+01:00I do have one question though. In the 3rd paragra...I do have one question though. In the 3rd paragraph you said<br /><br />The victim had smashed up the bar belonging to the defendant during a bar-room brawl. <br />Is the victim the dead guy? but he and a guy picked up a guy and killed him.Connie T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/01545099017971912245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-26170783287225608032009-04-15T11:11:00.000+01:002009-04-15T11:11:00.000+01:00Oh, you know I love these!! Well done :-)Oh, you know I love these!! Well done :-)TBMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05587580447766102705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1922338030834754301.post-70076787756588730042009-04-15T10:13:00.000+01:002009-04-15T10:13:00.000+01:00another great story Ak - and love those pics too.another great story Ak - and love those pics too.Flowerpothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14102679179201725732noreply@blogger.com